Piss the hell off you Kishimoto loving piece of shit.

Always Kishimoto loving ass-clowns around it would seem.

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)

I really like this story. I think I read it over on SV or SB - it is nice to have a place where I can comment on it. :)

Fuck off jerk-off.

Well... this is just boring.
While Sakura in Sakura had potential to be quite hilarious.
Maybe what is wrong here is the "quest" thing - heroines are quite different and this contrast would be the main joke. But the "quest" needs to focus on players' choices, and not many of them would have good grasp on characters' personalities and their interaction...