Reviews for The forbidden Princess
Eznf98 chapter 26 . 6/26
are you going 2 update this anytime soon
Axsal chapter 26 . 4/9
Hey I've been followed your story about ang and azula , and I'm really in love with it , could you please update more of this story about their romance?
Guest chapter 26 . 3/25
Puedes actualizar, por favor
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29
Can you please update
The Devil's Heir chapter 26 . 8/30/2019
Hi. So I've just read the whole thing and I have to say, I need M. O. R. E. Much much more. It is so freeing. It is very rarer that I get to share and revel in something. I know this was quite some time ago but please. Continue.
ZaydenNightshade chapter 26 . 7/5/2019
you know if Aang has the potential of all four elements as you put it so would Azula, she is directly descended from Roku after all.
Avatarfan chapter 26 . 6/25/2019
Finish this please
1nt3rD1ct0r chapter 26 . 6/16/2019
In addendum to my previous review, I should also add that I enjoyed the story, in case that was not conveyed, and wish for you to update it whenever you can. I will be waiting and I hope you are doing well in the mean time.
1nt3rD1ct0r chapter 26 . 6/16/2019
I've read everything so far, and while I skimmed all of the lemons except the first one (out of curiosity for how you wrote it), I think that your story is well written. Aside from the few but consistent spelling mistakes (the two I can think of off of the top of my head is you use 'sais' instead of 'says'; as in, to say or tell; and that you use 'save' instead of 'safe'; as in, to be free of harm), there is good structure to the story and the formatting isn't confusing. The grammar is also correct for almost the story's entirety, save maybe on or two examples, and there isn't any major spelling mistakes. The story was adequately suspenseful without there seeming to be random twists for no reason other than to surprise the reader. The pairing's odd, but I like Azula as a character. My only gripe for the story's writing is the copious use of out-of-context expletives. I don't think that the characters would swear that much, even if it is toned down in the show just for kids, and it seems a bit much. Overall, well written if not a somewhat weird story conceptually.
ziaragarcia chapter 1 . 5/30/2019
hi just wanna let you know that i'm still hoping for an update on this stroy.
WiseSilver chapter 26 . 4/23/2019
I know this has been left behind but gosh darn the latter half of this story is brutal as heck.
Gosh darn.
Great story but brrrrutal
Jonathan2000 chapter 26 . 3/22/2019
This is the best avatar fanfic on this website please
I hope one day you can finish this.
rita uchiha namikaze chapter 26 . 3/17/2019
Totally in love with this story, please continur this and finish this amazing story , i beg you! Please!
Guest chapter 26 . 2/22/2019
PLEASE I’M BEGGING YOU TO UPDATE
Niyuis chapter 26 . 1/9/2019
Love this fic!
I jumped to the Azulaang (?) ship recently and i glad i found your fic. It's so hard to find good story with those two.
Anyway, great fic. Finding all those Airbenders was heartbreaking, but they're free now and back home!
Kuei's death was too sudden, i was expecting more conflict but i glad there wasn't
Anyway, thank you for writing this fic and sharing it with us!
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