This time was better than the previous story because you had them talk a bit more as they acknowledged the depth of their feelings for each other. However, it would be more realistic if they went on a some dates before jumping into the sack. You write for many other fandoms and might not realize just how out of character that is for S&MK. Glad you're making the effort to write!

Loved this short story ! I hope you write more

Great story! Keep writing more :)

Great story! Hope you do more!

Great job! Lee needed a swift kick in his rear to make him confess his true feelings.