| Reviews for Honey Pot |
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Sewrtyuiop chapter 16 . 6/1 Real life shenanigans kept me stupid busy. Pandemic had me busier than ever and things have calmed down. You had me a little confused on the innuendo at the end between Ron and Tara until the quick draw jab. That comatose combined fertility hijinks must have made him extra sensitive this time. Seems Ron is falling back into la la land and Tara has to be quick to save him, seeing how she hasn't even fixed him yet. |
the grey mage chapter 16 . 5/20 Yeah, I'm kinda guessing you got bored around chapter 9, and then kinda went balls to the wall with how much time between chapters. I'm happy for you that you found long lost family. I can't imagine what that would be like. But this went from a story that would have been in the top 5 or 10 Ron/Bonnie stories of all time to Somme weird insanity. The pumping Ron for money and a secure future was great. The jealousy of felling like the second fiddle to Kim was great. But the ruthlessness and super left field actions and characters was jarring. I've got no regrets reading the beginning of this, and I'll stick it in my favorites. But I'm going to ignore where it just goes off the rails. |
the grey mage chapter 13 . 5/20 Bro this was a super fucking weird Gonzo chapter. I wonder how many dropped this great story right here. None of that matches the tone of the past 10 chapters. |
the grey mage chapter 3 . 5/20 What a fantastic scene. |
NeoTyson chapter 15 . 4/17 So this is the MMP and Lil Ron that you told me about. I think overall it came out nicely. Having the monkey break down to Lil ron the things he misses growing up and not being aware of his self will be good for the readers |
NeoTyson chapter 16 . 4/17 The general talk between Ron and Tara was a good read and a few other parts I like Tara explaining her move to Middleton and her way of trying to flirt and her expressing shes not as good at is like Bonnie. |
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 16 . 4/12 Nice chapter to sir the pot a bit. I’m guess Bon will get the boy in the end of the story, but having both get a little sidelined adds to the suspense. Still will be wonder how Kim’s and Ron’s conversation will go when it happens. Thanks for the read during these times. |
Guest chapter 16 . 4/9 Zzzzzzzzxx |
biob1 chapter 16 . 4/9 I have no clue what is going on and not really in a good way. |
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 16 . 4/8 Heh, Ron and Tara's interaction is just too good. Keep the good writing. |
If u aint Dutch u aint much chapter 15 . 4/4 This last chapter was actually probably my favorite. Will Bonnie get her comeuppance in some fashion or other before the storie‘s end? |
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 15 . 4/4 Nice to see you’re back. Enjoyed the chapter, it was to the point and sometimes that’s all that’s required. Thanks and can’t wait for the little chat between Kim and Ron, for them to get over the moodulator incident. I wonder if Kim was better than Bon? |
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 15 . 4/1 Great chapter here. Glad you updated. Keep the good writing. |
biob1 chapter 15 . 4/1 I liked this chapter |
SuperAmazingKid chapter 14 . 10/13/2019 Good story is Ron and Bonnie getting back together? |