This story rocks. It is a wonderful way to get your message out here. I comend you. I appreciate what you did with this story. A part of the goal of a writer is to say what they need to say and a creative fashion. You have done that and gone above and beyond.

Hi Mystic, I've read this story before but haven't reviewed it... I'm sorry... well I re-read it and it still touches me, it has a beautiful meaning and you've done right. I really like the atmosphear...
good work,
Bye Laura

I loved it! It made me cry!

This was awsome. I don't know why I haven't read it before. I just read like three days ago.

I love story line. Hit real close to home. I like how Max execpted the little girl without question. She knew that the girl needed help and she was going to help her and be there for her no matter what. You know I have always loved the way you write, you keep it real girl. Thats what I like about you. God Bless -Tab

Girl ya did it again!

You're an awesome writter, as if I haddn't told you before. This was a rather sad story, but you portrayed Dark Angel-y like. I got the same emotions as if I was watching an episode.

I was dissappointed that Max didnt hook up with Logan, but at the same time, they kinda did.

Well, I'ma read the rest of DA that I havent read that you've written.

Keep it up , and post soon from CHOICES!

That was so sad.. i love your work.. but this one stuck with me. You made me cry ... anyhow please write more stories soon.

I'm a devoted fan of yours. It doesn't really matter any more what you write about, it always turns out amazing. And I just love everything of yours that I've read.

This was sad. But it was also very good. And I really did enjoy it. Because while we'd all love for the world to go good and perfect around the Holidays, it doesn't. And many overlook that.

Great job! I enjoyed it very much and look forward to anything and everything else of yours.

beautiful

That is the MOst touching story i have read...not what i was expecting... but it was a story well written

COngrats

Okay, you did it girl, you made me cry. That was so incredibly sad and angsty, I felt my heart tear apart.

The voice-over was an incredible sentence. "To see an innocence in a child that I never saw in myself." Tough words girl, tough words.

It's nice to see something that wasn't all 'Bring out the fluff!'. My story wasn't entirely fluff (Unless tombstones suddenly got a Christmas meaning). And yours still fit the entire meaning of Crhistmas.

Jessie