please continue!

Good start. I hope you write more to it.

Hey, this story was published on my birthday!
This is a very good start. I like case!fics, I've written one myself. The details that you have put into your story are really investing. I like that the victim appears to be a two dimensional character. I like Lilly/Scotty platonic more but it could be interesting seeing the romance develop between them while they work on the case.
I look forward to more.