I think it was all really good, well the dream part was a little weird, and random but I'm a sucker for drama and there were some in there, but there was one part I didn't get and that was Kai's parents, I just didn't know what was going on, anyways I liked it and I think Ali was a good character, who doesn't like a purple ninja?

*ahem* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHSCREAMMMMMMM AHHHHHHHHHHHH

Kai in the cursed realm! This is like hot(hands of time(of course I meant that this isn't a dating site)

Its raining Kai's!

Strange... I had a dream just like that yesterday...Meh

He lives! he live! Yay! (is this the happy shouting face? Meh)

That elemental princess thing was a little too much for the story. A little too much. Way to much. You have a good backstory for her, but I think if someone that powerful to be alive, she would be breaking the rules of the green ninja, who is supposed to be the most powerful ninja in the land. Even then, due to her own reasons, Ali probably wouldnt have gone with them so easily without at least knowing what was going on first.

But shes your OC so whatever.

Dont think for a second I dont like the story. I like it, but it has room for improvement. For example, more detail and insight. Little bit of grammer issues. That sort of stuff.

:D Yay! Great ending! I just love your writing! I think I have another story you posted. I'll go and read! Awesome! XD
#GodIsLife!

YAY FOR MORRO! *cheers* LOCK EM UP! Wait, what are Kai and Nya's parents doing in the Cursed Realm? Well, whatever. I need to go help Morro take over the world.

~FFF

*vanishes through portal*

Ha! KAIlee and Nate. I get it! XD Aww! I just love those family moments! Why can't Ninjago just make Kai cry and see his parents again!? I want that so bad! I'm depressed right now. :( (It's really bad. :'()
#GodIsLife!

I feel bad for kai

Ninja never quit, Morro. I thought everyone knew that. XD Nice chapter! Lloyd! Why!? If Kai sees his father, I'm going to hug your legs. XD
#GodIsLife!

Oh Morro, don't you know that Ninja never quit? XD Nice chapter. Skylor... that was dumb. XD I'm so mean. Of course Kai's alive! What, you'd think his fire would be extinguished forever? No way! XD

Nice chapter! I don't really like Skylor, but I'll try and like her if she really does care for Kai like that. ;) Wait, Ali's suit is purple, right? The purple ninja was just a rumor, but you can make it happen on FanFiction! :D Need next chapter! XD

Pleeeeeeeeease update! Also Lloyd and Kai are so cute together as Brothers #Bromance! ;D