Great job! Loving it

I know you’re trying rewrite the story but could you repost the old chapters (somewhere else or in the story, whichever works). I loved this story so much and would love to read it again. Thanks!

Are you alive anymore? Ok, sorry, that was a blunt thing to say. Here is a more reasonable question:
Are you going to continue this?
This is pretty interesting, and fun to read. I am not entirely sure if Mabel is starting to trust Stan, or if Dipper has mental issues, (which he probably has), so it would be intriquing (is that how tou write it?) to read about it and maybe get answers to my questions.
And now, a word from my motivational side:
Don't give up on this, because it's pretty genius.
And, moving on to my insecure and a bit anxious side:
I hope this motivated you a bit, if you ever read this, that is, because I'm beginning to get the feeling that I'm a bit late on this. But, hey, whenever I find a good quality story, like this one, it is our readers' destiny to inspire those writers into continuing, if not for themselves, but then for the public! Ok, what is happening, I don't know, so, hope ya'll havin' a good day and maybe I'll see you in the next chapter, or not, depending if you have forgotten about the existance of this story, but anyway, I have been rambling for too long, so goodbye for now! :D

I am guessing you are never updating this again...
Good story tho

Hi! I know you probably get this all the time, but I love love love this story! It is so amazing and I see that you are (or were) in the process of rewriting it! I know life gets busy and you have things outside of this fanfic, but this story is so great and I hope I can ask if you're not planning to finish rewriting it (or aren't for awhile) if you could re-upload the original story so that the people who are just now finding it can read your amazing story! There is ofcourse no pressure in this! It's your fic and you have the right to do anything you like with it. But I am sure that all your readers would love to experience the full story!

Boy howdy, I'd sure like to see more of this, as I would be very interested to learn how foster care homes actually work, more or less. Itd be very neat and I think education on the horrors of adoption and Foster care and stuff would increase awareness and eventual reform. Also, Dipper would probably do well with a stupid teenager ideology, like if he just read Machiavelli's The Prince and decided to become that in real life.

I realize you’re revising or you were. But can you just reupload what you had in here before if you’ve given up revising cause I haven’t read this story before but it seems pretty good and the reviews seem to show there used to be a lot more chapters. So if you wouldn’t mind could you reupload what you have. Thanks!

I liked it, hope you update eventually.

Freaking update the story!

I would like to commend you for the level of care in this fanfic. I’m relatively new to gravity falls fanfiction, but this one stood out to me. If you are still updating it, I would love to read more. Good luck writing!

Honestly this is one of my favorite fanfcitions. You haven't updated it in a very long time so this may be an abandoned one but I'm letting you know it's amazing and if you ever decide to come back to it I have a tab open on my phone.

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Damn. I haven’t seen anything like this for gravity falls fics. Please continue. It’s great and your doing really well.

I just wanted to let you know that I’d love to see more of this, I’m waiting as patiently as I can! I’ve listened to the original version of this and I really like the subtle changes you’ve been making, it just adds to the story.

Okay, this story is going AMAZING so far. I look forward to what you can create! Keep up the good work!