Excellent.

10/10

WtTA

Excellent Black Lagoon fic. I recently got in it and this fic was really good in how you captured those two and the whole setting on Roanapur. Revy is one piece of work but it's true she is really attractive despite everything. The most funny part is that while Rock likes her body, he still keeps his distance for the reason you stated and Revy is more than happy he finally jumped her bones.

If you compare to the idiot who is just vulgar, Revy is quick to piss him off but she likes the respect and decency Rock has for her. I just hoped a little bit more smut but that's just the perv of me speaking.
Saluut.

pleasssssssseeeeee continue

Hahahahaha! Reminds me of my last date haha! Excellent job... Although how accurate you were is quite scary... *grumbles* Are you stalking me? *chuckles* I'm kidding about the stalking part but its excellent. Maybe you can make a multi chap with this pairing, the dynamic is intriguing! Keep up the great work!

Very nice! Loved how they head back to Revy's place for some more drinks and casual chilling. The dance club scene where Rock describe's Revy's dancing was also really good.

Very well written and very interesting. Job extremely well done.

You sure you still want to leave this as an one-off?

I can imagine all kinds of places you could take this story to!

Great job!

great story

That was fun to read, thanks!

Revy and Rock dancing! Oooooooo. That would have actually been awesome to see, really - for some reason, I feel that Revy is an amazing dancer. And man, oh man, I love where this went ;-)
Loved this story. Thank you so much for it.

R. K. Iris..

Thanks for the shout-out, comrade! Anyways, the two of us have pretty much just been writing Digimon for the 6 years or so that we've known each other, so I wasn't sure what to expect when you wrote this. Now, I daresay that it seems like you've been writing Black Lagoon for years instead of Digimon. This was so in-character and so well-written that if it's not perfect, it's just shy of it, brother. I love it!

Your friend,

Kal-El Fornia

Nice!
Just Nice!
The read was nice and the writing is nice.

Have to agree. Fun little fic, and well written for the most part but I wish you had included the sex scene in detail. Would have felt more satisfying after the very intimate moment shared in this fic.

it would been better if you added a lemon scene

This was a cute little story. Keep writing.