I didn’t really understand the point of a lot of the things that happened but overall I liked the story.

ugh Naruto must be really bad with names, he didn't want to call the Fox Fox so he called the Fox Fox

I love your story. Please continue it.

Well... You might as well call Shiro Deku... I get the feeling you got his Kekkei Genkai from One For All from My Hero Academia.

Also, you kept writing "Kekki Genki" instead of "Kekkei Genkai" in this chapter.
Want to see more please. Please continue.

Can't wait to see what powers the Fox Contract gives Naruto. We'll probably get Fuu with Sage Mode, right? That'd be awesome. Would be awesome for her to learn the Rasengan and a Water-based Rasengan, like how Naruto will have a Wind-Based Rasengan called Rasenshuriken / Rasen Shuriken. Ofcourse, Jiraiya wouldn't be able to teach her the Rasengan until Naruto gives him permission for it, since it's technically his family's (Namikaze) Jutsu. Now, for the Water-based Rasengan, I think it could be called Rasenbomu, but I'm thinking that would be a Fire-Based Rasengan because it explodes on impact... We also need Naruto with his Shadow Clones but I'm curious as to what you have planned to replace it.

Oh, and one last thing; I request that you please provide the English name of the attacks in parentheses, thank you. Example: "Suiton: Suiryudan No Jutsu (Water Release: Water Dragon)" Okay, to be honest, I don't remember the full English name for that attack, but it's the only thing that keeps popping up in my head. Anyways, good luck and please don't stop! Also, I hope to see an epilogue with Naruto and Fuu with their children (maybe include the wedding?) at the end of the story, if not planned earlier. Thank you for your time! This story is great!

This story is off to a great start. I wonder how far you'll go. Please don't stop.
I'm liking this too much. I wonder how Naruto and Fu will react to Jiraiya the Perverted Sage...

- G.X

Woo! Sweet!
I have to wonder though... What is Naruto's trademark Jutsu in this fic? He doesn't have the Shadow Clone Technique, so what will he have?
Liking the story, and I want to see more.

You say straight but I see yoai.

A decent story. But we, the audience, can't gauge the power of the characters. Your details are also lacking. The story has a lot of potential, so don't rush it and write thorough chapters.

you my friend has received the golden nenedekao stamp of approval

This is an interesting take for a story. The summary is something that I haven't seen before and Fu is my favorite jinchuriki (probably butchered the name horribly). Though, I will admit that I only read part one and haven't actually watched the anime, but I have played a few of the games and know how it ends.
A few questions that I do have are:
What happened to the Leaf since Naruto wasn't there? What happened to Gaara since Naruto wasn't there to save him from loneliness? Did Sasuke left the village? If yes, then why? These are some things that should probably be explained next chapter, since it does leave nice chunk out of what happened as well as they are plot points.
What will happen in the 4th war since there would be 3(?) living with an OC, compared to the original 2 living with no OC? This is something that would need some deep thought into before this arc happens, otherwise it would have some inconvenient plotholes or a long break to figure out how to not make said plotholes.

can't wait for more great story so far

Itachi is really milking his position as a double agent for all it's worth. No doubt he's counting on Jiraiya training Naruto and Fuu into a pair capable of taking him and Kisame on and at least escaping with their lives. Shiro will just be his insurance in this little plan to make sure Akatsuki fails to obtain all of the Jinchuriki.

Excellent chapter! So Team 12 has separated for now eh? And in three years, shall meets again. Fascinating!

I wonder what it’ll be like for Fū and Naruto to train with Jiraiya and Shiro with Itachi? Hmm...

See ya next update!

I’m enjoying the story. Looking forwards to more. Until next time

It was awesome
When is the next chapter coming out?