Omg more please

Ahaha! For a first try, that was pretty damn good. Nicely done! I would suggest going through and replacing some things with synonyms, but you did an excellent job balancing actions and emotions, and descriptions were spot on; I look forward to more like this!

OMG sexy lol

Pretty good for first smut, (im not even supposed to read this stuff XD) But sexy. C:(

Pretty well written if this is your first time writing a smut fanfic. If you'll be writing more in the future, please be sure to categorize it under the Rated M (for Mature) category, thanks! I liked how you included 3 different (slightly-ish) endings in your previous story, ''Dance Fever"/"Dance Fever (Eren Kicks Ass". I was a bit disappointed when you said that there won't be anymore upcoming chapters for the story itself, but it had a interesting ending to make up for it.