Hello, This would have been a great story. I really wished that you could have finished writing it.

I hope this gets continued, I'm hella interested! It wasn't even mentioned if the Phoenix feather was left in the trunk or recovered from Ron's vandalism and theft. I like the spin on this Ron being a sneaky theif that none of his roommates caught on to until he was caught in the act. He's GOT to be in humongous trouble with like...everyone! Especially when news gets around that he's not only not trust worthy with your stuff but also not trustworthy as your long time friend, nevermind a new friend, cuz the other Gryffindors are damn sure gonna talk about what Ron said to his "best friends" and how he was trying to make Harry out to be crazy and temperamental only for it to be revealed that HE'S truly the one like that instead. Bet some of them are gonna speculate that he'd steal from his own family putting him in an even worse light. Ahhh, I can invision the shenanigans~

I know it has been a while, but this is such a great start. I don't know if there will be another update but I do hope so. Take care.

Oh my. Wow. Update soon.

When I think of Hermione Granger, the most outstanding characteristics are not her intelligence or bravery. Its her loyalty and hard work.

Hufflepuff Hermione, anyone?

Enjoyed the story.

This is an interesting variation of GOF. It's believable that Ron could be such an ass, but to be so blatant is foolish. If he's been getting away with theft for three years, there is some subtlety around him. Yes, he was in a fit of temper & jealousy, but Ron has a lot of self protection built in. Allowing the other dorm mates to come round to Harry's side could lead to some intriguing situations. Would like to see update, please, Thanks

Great story, hope you still working on this story.

I love how this story is going, you have a great way of writing these situations that can seem OOC in a way that makes them feel like naturally flowing progression. I saw that you haven't updated since 2016 but if you ever come back I'd love to see how the rest of this story goes!

This was going so well. Do you have plans to return to it someday? I'm really curious what will happen when Harry takes the potion. Great writing.

Too bad, nice beginning!

A brilliant Idea would it be to continue with this Story. It could be very good.
perhaps McG should have him try the hat once again.

Ron: Stupid hat place me back to Gryffindor and Put Potter to the slimy snakes where he belongs.
Hat: As you wish. you will be placed in ...(imagine jaws theme here) Slytherin.

I need more of this.

Wow, I love bashing and I could see this happening if Ron was to turn out differently in the books. Wish there was more though since I really wanted to know what you had planned for Harry's change :)

i love your story.

kind of sad you abandoned it

I'd love to see where this goes if you get back to it. Ron the thief is a twist I've not seen and the idea of turning part Phoenix is rash but intriguing. Maybe it could be the way to a magical animagus form.