Lol! The omake really fun! The stories about Makarov too!

Ur and Kuzan heal each other huh? That’s really good friendship.

Hooooollllyy shit this was a roller coaster ya got no clue how much I enjoyed this. And I especially enjoyed the fact that ya brought a very likable character and brought him to fairy tail. It’s unique since you made this your own and basically change canon. Keep up the AMAZING work bud

Okay. This is probably bad but the best part of this chapter was the fact I knew who the football comic was about. (The rest of the chapter was amazing as well. It was more of a personal achievement/happy moment)

kuzan x ur?

Nice

They're all bad parents
Kuzan is a nice guy but he never made people stop to think about what he said after the first few chapters and skipped out on somebody elses character development or strength development

you gave kuzan too little role here. it is a crossover between fairy tail and one piece. but you focused too much on FT characters.

the plot so far is good. you gave all major characters to develop, but it misses the focus of having crossover. kuzan's role should have more focus on, you can give him role of a teacher for all the kids if he can't be an active mage anymore. having observation haki (coverted to magic) is good for them, also soru for most physical focused ones for either escape or just evading, even tekkai is useful.

try to integrate more of OP abilities, don't just keep downgrading kuzan.

overall, I'm liking your story and am following it.

So fucking awesome! I just read through your story in two days. I love your decision to youse Kuzan as the main character and that we get a matured perspective on fairy tale.

I also really loved how you handelnd the romance between Kuzan and Ur (They fit each other perfectly)

damn a what heartstopping arc, this is getting good although i really wondering if your gonna keep the jellel and ultear AU similar or not since Ur would instantly recognize Ultear as her daughter

Huh, just thought of something, could Zeref and Mavis have freed themselves of the curse they both have by just going to another world? If I understand the concept right, the curse was given to both of them by that one gods whose name I don’t trust myself to spell because they both went against the rules of life and death. Zeref by resurrecting his brother/screwing around with creating life, and Mavis by using the original Law spell Fairy Law was based on. Basically the two of them (or at least their physical bodies) constantly exude death magic that kills anything they start to care about within a specific radius, while also making themselves immortal. But what if they just went to another world. Either one where the god that cursed them has no power/authority, or one like Edolas where magic isn’t omnipresent like it is on Earthland, so presumably even if the curse would follow them, it couldn’t do anything because it would have no fuel to work off of. Just a thought, and since this whole incident makes me think that the guild as a whole think more about the subject of multiple world, might be cool to see someone suggest that if they ever encountered Zeref or Mavis and learned about the curse, which could either end up giving a greater sense of tragedy to what happened to the both of them (since after hundreds of years looking for a way to free themselves they could find their was a vivable and relatively simple solution that could have spared so many lives), or we could get an explanation as to why it wouldn’t work/why they wouldn’t do it even if they knew (assuming they didn’t already).

I like that Ur picked up on the fact that Kuzan wasn’t surprised by the other dimension. I’m getting my hopes up here.
They went to the grave and Ur asked him. She finally asked him, I really felt the shivers down my spine while reading that.
The confrontation was great, and so was Ur’s reaction, sadness and anger. And boiii they kissed! Whoo.
So. Gildarts left with Jellal, and he actually managed to get to Edolas. Nice.

The way this chapter was going, it felt like the ending of a book, the last chapter, tidying everything up for the 2nd book, with a timeskip inbetween.
I, who love reactions and reveals. Really loved this chapter, Kuzan finally told Ur the truth. I’m so happy! ... now I’m thinking about her daughter. Now i’m sad. Will they meet in the future, with Ur seeing a ice cold killer in front of her? I sure hope not. I hope they’ll work it out.

Wonderful chapter. Digging the character interactions a lot!

Oh Mira tells Gildarts that Cana is his daughter, so he knows, she knew, or whatever. And is going after his daughter, no matter what.

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Through it all, Kuzan had stayed silent with a face that might as well have been carved out of ice for all the emotion it displayed. When she finished he didn't say anything. He wanted to reach out and place a reassuring hand on her shoulder or rub her hair to let her know it was okay, but he was shaking too badly. His jaw was clenched to keep his teeth from chattering, and he could feel his whole body vibrating worse than any tremors Whitebeard ever made. He wasn't sure if it was pure anger at the scum that had put his daughter through such a horrible ordeal, overwhelming fear that he couldn't do anything about what had happened or make it better, or a mix of both that was keeping him frozen in indecision. He wanted to go freeze the entire ocean and stalk it until he found the Tower of Heaven and tore it down brick by frozen brick. He wanted to grasp Erza in a tight hug and never let her go, to keep her safe from the world that had been so needlessly cruel to a child to rob her of her innocence. To actually save and protect the broken girl he found this time instead of leaving her to fend for herself. He knew that this world wasn't a perfect paradise, but he had once again tricked himself into not looking at the ugliness it contained, just like in his original world.

With a deep, steadying breath, Kuzan suppressed his emotions like a good Marine. There would be time to deal with this later. Right now, Erza needed support and reassurance not wrath and vengeance. He gently pulled her into a hug and quietly said, "Thank you. I know that couldn't have been easy to say and I want you to know how much it means to me that you trust me enough to tell me that." He felt her start to shake with silent sobs and knew that there would be tears running down half of her face, the other half unable to shed any since Porlyusica had given her the replacement eye. He stroked her back and let her cry as he whispered into her ear.

"I'm so proud of you."

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Intense!

I love proud papa kuzan.

YYEEEEES! Kuzan and Ur kiss! Love!

Nice chapter, good work.