Just finished this and it was really good! Can't wait for the second arc, it's been quite a while since this was last updated so I hope it's still being made. Looking forward to it if/whenever you do put it out.

I've really enjoyed this first arc. I hope the next one has a lot more Chloe as she learns about everything that's happened since Max first left. I hope you update soon.

Really enjoying the story can't wait for the next chapter

very good story so far! hope we get more chloe in the next part thought :3

Nice writing, but how was Max able to use her power if she had been dosed with suppressant and the food was supposedly laced with it aswell?

Damn! I look forward to the continuation, and max getting with Chloe. Hopefully things become somewhat normal for them again. Also...would David be a problem? I can't remember.

Hey I appreciate the thanks! By the way I loved this chapter despite you saying it's short. The way you write shows the plain confusion that Max is feeling in this chapter and a good show of the other characters as well!

You've done a great job with this story enjoyed it so far, looking forward for more! :)

Max is doing all that with a hand burned to second or third degree? That being said, the paramedics would have carted her off to the hospital too. Great writing

A bit confusing in a inception sort of way (is the dreaming? dreams inside dreams?) and frankly, i'd give it a double mush at most. But great writing as always

This is just killing m. I hope she makes it alright, as for the rag thing...somehow that sounds an awful lot like my inner darkness hat I keep locked up. If someone tested on me and caused me to separate... Well I don't think I want to imagine that outcome.

Love love love this story. Please keep it up.

Yay keep em coming capn! Love the story to bits!

Well do I really have to type anything here I think you know what I think but it was great to read another chapter. Keep it up I know I will love anything you create. aaaaand I woulden't ming longer chapters just saying but I still love them as they are so in my opinion you don't have to change anything.

Damn. This is intense. I hope Chloe will sit down and actually listen to max.