| Reviews for Pluto |
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oO Phantom Writer Oo chapter 14 . 8/18 You are an amazing writer Author-san! Keep up the great writing, I'm looking forward to new updates! |
Chiyukisa chapter 14 . 8/8 Ils sont tellement adorables ! |
KrixLight chapter 14 . 8/1 omg!that's so cute! |
123 chapter 14 . 8/1 :P |
Natsuyuuki chapter 14 . 8/1 Thanks for update! |
Dixie.f.9 chapter 13 . 7/19 So Tom was very vulnerable and could not walk. |
666Neko chapter 13 . 7/5 interesting story thanks for sharing it with us readers |
HoneyBear84 chapter 13 . 7/5 Love it and seriously can't wait for the next update. btw who was Tom's Wife? |
Riddle-Snape chapter 13 . 7/5 Maaaan Harry is again drama sad mess, but Voldy in this chap was nice part hehe... wonder how they make new house |
582Raven chapter 12 . 7/2 Very nice I've had my reservations, but now that everything's coming together, it's growing in me :) Thank you for sharing |
Ada1229 chapter 9 . 6/12 Chapter 9: Hagrid: "A player named Lucius" Harry: 'Hmm so nothing special then' Me: ...I don't know weather to laugh at the major insult to Lucius Malfoy or facepalm at Harry completely disregarding that he know a Lucius in his first life |
Ada1229 chapter 2 . 6/12 Chapter 2: So Luna san just a thing, it's bad form if you just thrust a character into the future to live there on a permanent basis and give them no form of information on how everything works or how things have progressed from the 80s. I didn't click on this story to see Harry stumble his way into the game. You even have a way to give him said info. That ball of light the Fates pushed into him that took away his magic (I'm assuming that's what you used it for) could yes take his powers but at the same time give him his new life's memories and with it the inherent understanding of the technology around him, sort of like Equivalent Exchange from Full Metal Alchemist. Also I honestly don't think any ammount of medical advancement or technological advancement would make the Dursleys change THAT much, I mean this nature you're having them display is that of a caring parent compared to their 80s selves. It's just not them |
AnnySakura chapter 12 . 6/10 (﹏) Tanto amor... por favor no sigas la serie y sacalos a ambos. Necesitan ver a Teddy y casarse oficialmente. |
HoneyBear84 chapter 12 . 6/10 Love it and seriously can't wait for the next update |
FearThePuggles chapter 12 . 6/9 OMG! I love this so much |