Woah, Bri's back! Good job on this chapter!
Real talk, I haven't been able to get fanfics out either. Don't worry. Be patient with school and you'll have lots of fun with fanfics. I'm in college now and I'm still working on my patience with writing vs. life. :)

Eeeyy! There's Onpu's sassiness! I feel like the real intrigue just started, amIright, Bree? XD So exciting! It was nice to remember Yabu after such a long hiatus. :3333333

You're doing great! I do really enjoy this story. Do what you can but continue to work hard! Thx for the recent chapter!

Hi! I liked this chapter. Lots of character building and plot. I actually liked the part where you described Doremi getting dressed even though I thought I wouldn't. You interlaced the dressing with her own thoughts and what others thought too. That's a mark of good writing. :)

Nice to read Onpu isn't happy with the arranged marriage. Feels a lot more in-character than the way most OnpuxTooru stories have them lovey-dovey from the word go.

Also, I'm starting to hope someone murders Leon in his sleep, as this is easily the most despicable incarnation of the character I've ever read.

Noooo, the baby! This is absolutely heart-wrenching! DX
I love the background drama! :)

Wow, I can relate to Momoko. School doesn't get out for SIX WEEKS here...DX
I'm glad you updated! :D

Go Aiko! Show him who's boss! XD Go you, Bri-chan! X3

*smacks Hazuki*
*smacks Leon*
*smacks Yabu*
*smacks Akatsuki*
*Smacks everyone*
*Except Aiko*
*And Tooru*
*Cause he's nowhere to be seen*

I can almost smell the drama. It's coming. Very close.

Momoko doesn't have many inhibitions...

"Often rewarded with land and money, among other things."

Among illegitimate pregnancy.

Among da D.

Among Life.

Among Leon's fabulous treatment of women.

I love how chill Leon is.

"Yo you wanna have sex with me?"
"No"
"Alrighty then"

I love Leon but at the same time I kind of want to smack him with a fence, like, these things are complicated.

I can already tell by how Hazuki acts in this story that her pregnancies are not gonna be easy. Like, miscarriage here, stillborn there, yada yada.

THE YAMO, THE LEAI, IT BEGINS! IT IS BEGINNING YAS

Dang, Hazuki is so selfish and mean in this story.

Half of the characters I kinda just wanna...

Cook them...

In a frying pan...