Can’t wait for the rewrite

he's like an oliver wood with swimming isn't he

Oh my god, I hope that everything's OK!

It explains so much about Haru! How could I have been so blind!
Also is it weird that I see Octopimps Haru in this? I can just hear him saying really inappropriate things to the water and Harry's like 0_o

I think Hari/Haru/Mako would be an interesting idea! I actually am thinking of writing a story where Harry is Makato's younger brother; Hari Tachibana.

It's an awesome story! I can't wait for the rewrite!

Hi me it's akerthy I love this history and j'espere that version rewritten and corrected happen soon because I am eager to read it I wish you luck, longevity and all I want to happiness for the coming year brief Merry Christmas. (I am francophone and I have a hard to write in English therefore thousand excuses would there are faults even if j'en doubt.)

i really do adore your story, and would love to read more. And i am so sorry to hear about your house and dogs.

Fair enough! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I liked it and look forward to your rewrite.

I have one critique one thing that always makes me cringe is when harry tells his whole life story straight up to someone he's just met, maybe ease into that or have bits and pieces given over time even just a quick general overview, just not the whole tells everything all at once straight away bit.

I loved how you had haru and his reaction to the bubble head charm and gillyweed that was awesome. I also hope just for laughs you have him stripping down and heading for water in public with harry.

The airplane food bit is so true! MOSt of it is just disgusting.

As someone who is asexual, I can tell you it's perfectly easy for an asexual to be in a romantic relationship. I'm actually a panromantic asexual.. I can fall in love with anyone, even though I'm not sexually attracted to anyone! We're the best types of cuddlers. True facts. xP Harry always struck me as someone ace, too.. or maybe demi-sexual(Where you only develop sexual feelings for someone after getting to know them very, very well). Though, I'm super partial to the HarixHaru pairing you seemed to be hinting at, I'd actually be super excited to see a polyamorous relationship. If you chose to make Hari asexual, it'd make sense if his romantic partner had a second, sexual partner. Plus, Hari would probably be open to a multi-relationship, having been raised in such a touch-starved and love-starved family. Of course, you don't have to have Hari with Haru, either. I'm open to anybody being his love interest, and having other, side pairings fluttering about. (My favourite triad pairing is actually HaruxGouxMako, weirdly enough. I think they'd fit.) Thanks for the hard work!

I give you hug

it's a good story ! i love it 3 please update soon

i thought the story was good