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Fangirl all da way chapter 12 . 6/1 Ooh Alex, you shouldn't go around making promises you might be able to keep... That was great I'm looking forward to all that "getting worse" and PTSD Thanks for this awesome chapter Staying tuned for more, Take care! -Fangirl (Also, I didn't know you were on ao3 What's your user?) |
Fangirl all da way chapter 11 . 5/25 Yay! Thanks for updating :) Sorry I’m late This chapter is awesome I could totally see everything happening Loved it! Especially his interactions with the kids And the grownup’s reactions Staying tuned for more, (and I will totally hold you to that) Take care! -Fangirl |
Buddels chapter 11 . 5/25 It's great that you have decided to continue writing the story! The idea is very original and different from what's already out there. Rosie is just so cute! She is such a sweet, confident and smart girl and how Alex treats her (or she treats Alex) is just wonderful! I think all the love and attention is really good for Alex. And I also really liked how Rosie's parents watch Alex and slowly realize that something is wrong. Do they know that Alex is a foster child? Well, anyway, I already love Alex's foster brothers Ryan, Ben and Felix! And that even though they only appeared for a short time. I hope they play an even bigger part in the story. I'm definitely super excited to see how things will continue! |
Paufa chapter 11 . 5/24 Thanks for the update! It was a great chapter... can’t wait for the next one |
pletchko chapter 4 . 5/5 Hey, I love this story so much! Rosie is such an adorable character, and the way that her father jumped in to save Alex is really heartwarming! I can't wait to read more! 3 (Just two really small things to brit pickEMTs in the UK are called paramedics, and the E.R. is actually called A&E (which stands for Accident and Emergency |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/14 Brilliant chapter, well done. Stay safe |
Nrandom chapter 10 . 4/12 I’ve been enjoying this story a lot! I’m so curious to see where the birthday party goes. I hope you stay safe in these challenging times. |
Fangirl chapter 10 . 4/8 Awwww So fluffy... And then wow that went to angst so fast We understand :) I hope those close to you stay okay Of course, Thanks for this amazing chapter Stay whelmed! -Fangirl all da way |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/5 That’s alright, I get it I really enjoyed reading this chapter And I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes Take your time Course work sucks, but sadly you still have to do it If you’re too tired to write, that’s okay Hope you have a great week! |
BluishBleach chapter 8 . 3/4 Loved this chapter! Tom and Alex's friendship is so interesting to me, and I think you've done a fun and unique job at capturing what it could be (because the books are kind of vague on Alex's relationships with other people lol). I also liked their conversation about Ian, and that they were both really misunderstanding what the other person wants and needs! I love the way you're portraying Tom a lot, and I hope that these boys can continue to be open with each other! And that Tom can stick around and learn just what happened to his best friend recently lol, I feel like that would be good for him to know! |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/27 Looking forward to the rest of the story, I like how Alex interacts with the street kids! Keep it up Seth8627 |
Fangirl all da way chapter 8 . 2/27 Yes, I'm lonely This fanfic is awesome It needs more attention I love how Alex fluff is always somewhat angsty Looking forward to reading more, may the weekend be here before we know it! -stay whelmed |
Fangirl all da way chapter 7 . 2/19 I GOT THE REFERENCE! Sorry for that, my asterous friend It's late and I'm tired and I probably shouldn't be on here right now I noticed you'd written a fanfic in that fandom, but it was a long time ago... Anyways, loved the angst Thanks for leaving us with the mystery of who this 'Will' person is and what he has to do with Alex Whatever happens next, I'm sure It'll be well written and updated on time as usual Can't wait! -stay whelmed |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/13 I love this! Great stuff! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/13 I love it! 3 |