Thank-you again for sharing, on to the sequel!
Peace Beth

Seeing new updates for the sequel, I thought what better way to start is by rereading "Teacher's Pet", chapter one, here I go. Thank-you for sharing
Peace Beth

Yesyesyesyes, I love it so much, it is so cute, and I can feel its cuteness. I love the character of Lauren, she is very well written. I loved it when they went to the zoo together, it was really cute. I love the relationship Charlie and Lauren have, it feels so natural, and they truly love each like a mother and daughter right way, or at least in a teacher and student way. I felt the sexual tension between Bolo, and they're so cute, the BANTER, I couldn’t get past 24!, the sex felt very forced, and not as cute as it was at first, the “my love” and “I love you”s felt unnatural. I thought the twins were sweet, but irritating and just sort of there. To me, I didn’t really see them develop at all, and they felt very flat. I knew they meant well, and I did like that that one twin had a crush on Tamsin, that was very cute. There are a lot of things they say that are a little cringy and even seem out of character. The lemon parts made the experience a little sad for me, the things they say, it almost sounds like a low-budget porno. I dislike how they always say “I love you”. I really loved the conflict with Dyson, and liked how Lauren fought him, and was possessive. I love how Bo is like a master of self defense, and how she let Lauren top her, that warmed my heart, because she always seems in control, and because she let someone else have control over her, it was a sacrifice, and really sweet. The excessive use of “babe” and “baby” was annoying. The lemon parts were great at first, but by the end, they seemed forced, and excessive, almost like they were trying to prove something to their partner, or the world, almost like they are ignoring/denying something. The Halloween idea was super cute in 33 with Lauren as Luigi, Bo as Mario, and Charlie as Yoshi. Shadow thief is a interesting name, but a little strange. I felt like the story lost its original spark in the last half of the story, it was still good, but not as amazing as the first half was, for me at least. I didn’t like the pregnancy sex that much, because it felt a little forced, and awkward, and not just because she is pregnant. Other than those couple of things, overall it was a very good story. I also love how you included Tamsin in the story, I adore the way you wrote her, even though she only in it for a little bit, also I loved the way you wrote Kenzi as well.

Thank you for this story,I am actually rereading it because I had a bad day and needed something to cheer me up,looking forward to the sequel!

Love these characters, all of them. Now, onto the sequel!

WOW! I loved this story. It is my very first FanFiction story I have read. Now I am totally hooked. Thank you for writing this lovely romance. I will be reading all of your other stories as well.

Where is my sequel?

Chapter 10 might be my favorite thing to ever read. Glad to hear there's a sequel coming :)))

This story is so perfect! I especially love how goofy Lauren's brothers are. They definitely keep BoLo and Charlotte on their toes! I can't tell you enough how much I love reading this one. I've read it probably more than I should but it's just so upbeat and fun.

I do hope you continue with a sequel! Even if it's just a small one? I've grown to love these characters so much.

Thank you for this. Hope to see you continue to write Lost Girl Fanfics. Thank you thank you thank you!

Thank-you, as always I appreciate and grateful for the story's you are sharing with us.
I still think that the twins were immature, for coming out of a military rank, of their duty. They behaved more like teenagers. I'm sorry I not trying to be rude or disrespectful.
Sequel! I would love to read, oooh Dyson extremely jealous of the Lewis family and of Bo Dennis, so he takes on a task of finding out who each person is. Looking through Bo's past, discovers who Charlie's father really is, and the destructive nature of Dyson is exposed!
Just a thought!
Peaceful thoughts and positive energy sent out to us all!
ZoiefanAnna2

That was awesome! I can't wait for the sequel

Can't be more than happy that they finally got married. And also that's there gonna be a sequel because I want to know about their honeymoon and if there's gonna be a baby.
Love so much this story!

They are so lovely. Can't wait for the sequel.

Hi! I'm excited to read that there will be a sequel. O absolutely loved this story, u are an amazing writer. I love Charlie. Can't wait for part 2.

Yes! !A sequel! Love it! Thank you so much :) Take care and much love :)