Bitch OC is crazy like Jerome. Boring OC. Boring story!

More please. This is amazing.

oh i like this story

she's a total BAMF!loved it!

omg im sooo happy u decided to continue this! im loving how your writing Jerome and the Enchantress's relationship

Oh wow that was awesome, the part towards the end had my mouth hanging wide open it was so good. Update soon.

Wow this was an amazing opening chapter, the oc had me on the edge of my seat with anticipation and left me feeling as dazed as she probably had Jerome feeling, you really fleshed out the beginnings of an interesting and mysterious character; i hop you continue this into a multi chapter fic.

Keep going

I don't usually swear but... Fuck she is cool. She's a very interesting character! Even i was a bit dazed (which is usually a very difficult thing to do, even with a character) but she is completely different. I like it a lot.
And even Jerome. HE WAS PERFECTLY EXECUTED AND IN CHARACTER THE WHOLE TIME. HOW DO YOU DO IT?! It was bloody amazing. Definitely set the bar high for other fanfictions to say the least.
Im not gonna lie, I was a bit unsure at first like... Sort of hoping she wasn't gonna be like... an unoriginal charater but boom... She walked in like an angel. And even then, when she talks she just oozes 'listen to me. I am interesting and I will interest you and all will be cool'.
It was so good! Thank you for the ace first chapter!

Pls pls pls update I wanna see some magic :p

Fun fun fun story. Please continue. :)

Really Great!

This seems really interesting and I hope you continue to 1 make it a multi chapter fic!

More!

I just happened upon this story...and yes! Please make more chapters! This was awesome and I want to read more of it!