mega evolution?

Ch 2

Not the best story the other way brilliant that is coal .
Something is missing.

Ch 1

Last Ch 2

The original Story Aura Master was way better.

Are you planning to do the movies too? With any difference? I hope you do something different with Mewtwo. He is my all time favourite. I like the fact tht he is traveling just by himself and his pokemon. It gives him more maturity, independence and the actual chanche to bond and advance with his team without others hindering him. If I could make a suggestion for an electric type, go with a shinx. That ev line is one of the coolest and a pikatchu is way too overrated now.

interesting

Love the story and hope you update soon.

Any chance of any Incest happening at all?

If you haven't already, I highly suggest reading Tzhaa's Ash and Dawn: The Unova Chapter and its sequel, The Legacy of Aura (currently in progress). It's a really good read if you don't mind about four (I think) lemons throughout the first story. It has a dark theme and is based on Ash's Aura capabilities. Just a suggestion if you're looking for inspiration. But aside from that, I'm loving the story so far, so keep it coming please :)

This is just really awesome I can't wait for more

How much difference will this be than Aura Master? Hope least some of the pokemon are the same and the nicknames given are as well.

Cannot wait to see where this one goes. Maybe least continue the other one but have it as a parody?

Much later will there be shipping or will there be none? Doesn't matter to me but if there is please can it not be the typical cannon pairs? Maybe Sabrina, Roxi, Korrina(since she knows bit about aura), or such?

Good luck with this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Take your time!

Interesting story so far!

Funnily enough, I've read both versions and I honestly can say that I liked the first version of this better. Its difficult to peg exactly *what" I like better, but it's there.

Maybe it's the grammar, I don't remember the grammar and language being quite so rough in Aura Master.

It could also be because of the pacing. You're right about how Aura Master went kinda fast, but I honestly didn't mind quite so much.

Anyway, that's just my two cents. I do look forward to seeing how you change this one.

amazing story really great story line can't wait for the next chapters

Good story, love it but you should give him tyrantrum it would be cool to see other people freak out because of it

interesting fic, can't wait til riolu gets more aura moves