I found that surprisingly awkward and romantic. Great job! I hope you might update it soon.

Aww So sweet I've been actually wanting to read a story like this

Normally I don't really care for songfics, but this is sweet. Although Conrad does seem rather uncharacteristically impulsive here, he really does care deeply for Yuri. The whole betrayal incident certainly caused a lot of grief for both of them.

Next time (should you write another fanfic) we as readers would love to see a bit fewer lyrics and more of your own words, which have a lot of potential. As does Conyuu!

Chintz

Ahh, thank you so much! ;v; you're so sweet. I'm ridiculously glad that we inspired you enough to write your own! I really liked this one, it was simple and sweet, I also happen to love that song XD if I had to try and help you write better I suppose I would say to sometimes use him/his/he etc. Instead of the character's name all the time, but it's a lovely start! I adore conyuu, so thank you for writing for it! :)