I really liked the story, at first I was hesitant cause of the previous reviews but I'm glad I read it it's lovely update soon

You wouldn't say "Edward was taking I to stay with his mother and father," so don't say "Edward was taking Princess and I to stay with his mother and father." Use ME. ("Edward was taking Princess and ME to stay with his mother and father.") Eliminate the comma after "Princess," too.

You shake your head for "no." You nod your head for "yes." Sigh.

The realization was DAWNING on him, not DONNING.

Sorry, I'm done with that slap to a 17 year old who is just trying to fight for her freedom and who's been kept in the dark of whatever is going on around her and she's just expected to follow orders. Sorry isn't entertaining at all to read.

Even her sister won't help the poor girl out. I suppose this is to further frustrate us.

Of course Edward kidnapped her. He's taken all her rights and freedom. There's no such thing as a forced arranged marriage like this unless it's by a human trafficker or other such evil men. Mob men don't need to kidnap their wives, they may be cruel but this is overboard. And the black wedding dress..really? What's that going to prove.

He already did hit her. Who is he to slap her ass and take away all her rights and then blame the murder of that security guard on her. I don't like reading stories about abuse, this is abuse and no amount of reason will redeem this Edward.

So yeah I guess this is one of those mob stories where the reader gets frustrated by the senseless violence. I get when it's needed but to shoot the innocent guard just to teach Bella a lesson to behave and kneel at his bidding, doesn't make me like this Edward at all. He's a monster and why would I want to see Bella with one of those? I'll give this a few more chapters but if I don't see some sort of reason for all this...

Go Bella. Edward deserves to see the poor girl run away from him. Of course she isn't going far but at least she tried.

Good question Bella. Why have her parents cast her out of their lives? Why wouldn't they at least come to the wedding? And Bella breaking down crying to Esme was the first real understandable emotion and Bella should have followed up by telling Edward's mother just how she's feeling so maybe someone will be there to support the poor girl as she's going through this ridiculous arranged kidnapping.

Shittest ending ever!

Why warn this Bella was going to be a brat? Surely any young female who was forced to be with a man, taken from her home and all her freedoms taken from her would act like she's acting. I would actually be fighting him tooth and nail. Heck with her parents because no reason would be good enough to be kidnapped and forced into a life she's going to be forced into. I'll guess she falls for Edward even though he's a man who would do this to an innocent girl? There's no reason good enough and I'd be more of a 'brat' than she is she merely trying to make sense of losing who she is and her freedom. Horrible.

I think this Bella, knowing this day would come when she was given to a prearranged marriage should have made plans to run. Who does this kind of thing anymore? Really. And why would a man want a girl he doesn't even know when certainly he could court anyone but to take a young girl by force is barbaric and certainly her parents should be shot and I'm guessing that's why they give away their daughters so they aren't shot. Interesting premise even thought it's not realistic. At least not normal, sure sounds like human trafficking to me.

Im disgusted with Bella, kissing Edward like that. She goes on and on about how she hates him, doesn't want to be married, doesn't want to kiss him but as soon as he kisses her shes all about it. Its kinda gross and makes Bella seem really flippant, as if we cant believe anything she says.