I really like your Luna/Abby combo. You should do a full story on 2nd year and then following WCIS back to America.

This was a very enjoyable story, especially as it is for my two favorite genres. Thank you so much for getting poor Neville away from hid Gtandmother and Great-Uncle. I always wished that he could have been able to live with people who truly supported him. And I think you got all the NCIS characters down perfectly.

Very nice, and thanks for writing it!

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Loved the story thank you

Thank you I had read this story in its other form and I had enjoyed it but I have really enjoyed reading this version .

Luna and wrackspurts? Can it get any better? WHEEE!

I'm very happy that Gibbs and his team were able to get Neville away from the abusers in his family. Wouldn't it make Snape turn over in his grave, if he knew that by dying he'd actually done some GOOD for Neville? :)

On one hand, I was pretty satisfied with how this story ended and felt like this chapter was completely unnecessary. On the other hand, the interactions between Abby and Luna were absolutely hilarious to read, so I did enjoy this omake.

Great addition to a great story. Thank you for sharing!

I'm surprised Snape doesn't do what Myrtle, Binns and every other Hogwarts ghost did and come back to haunt Hogwarts, even just to temporarily be there long enough to point the finger at his killer if he saw them before/after he died. *lol*

Absolutely loves this! Thank you so very much for sharing your amazing talent and stories!

Brilliant story and first chapter! I love Gibbs in charge! Bumblecluck isn't going to be able to get past him! Hehe! Gonna doesn't trust him! Hehe! Also, Bumblecluck is in for a surprise when both Petter/Scabbers, and Quirrelmort, are both outed! Thank you so much for thinking up a brilliant new story and beautifully writing it!

I have only one complaint about this otherwise excellent fic: you put Abby and Luna in the same universe, but arranged it so they could not meet. Perhaps another time?

Cool. Good