I loved this story so much like you have no idea! I JUST LOVED IT! I WOULD KISS YOU AND HUG YOU FOR MAKING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY BUT I DONT KNOW YOU BUT WHATEVER *KISSES YOUR KISS COUNTLESS OF TIMES AND BEAR HUGS YOU*

OMG I AM FUCKING CRYING INSIDE MY HEART THE FEELS ARE TOO MUCH!

OMG Im legit feeling tears in my eyes. So touten wasn't lying that hestia wouldnt be immortal if he died. ;-; lead nataku to goku hestia

LEGIT THIS BADASS MOMENT NATAKU KNOCKED HIS FATHER OFF HIS MOTHER I WAS ABOUT TO SAY "OH SHIT" AND I CHOKED ON FUCKING AIR AND SALIVA DUDE XDDD Imma end up dying while reading this

im seriously covered in feels shit ;-;

Im like so thrilled and exited and so happy but I feel like crying i dont even know why omg im sorry but im loving your story I do have to say I skip whatever is in the story that is in that little B**** touten pov but other than that this is great *_*

I swear if it wasnt for my family being asleep I would scream in rage. omg thats such a filthy lie Li Touten!

I seriously cursed bad when i read this. li touten you serioysly are a huge son of a ***** f****** A****** ;-; It would be better if you were dead. Please kill Li Touten somewhere in the book! TT_TT

this makes me happy and sad, im still doubting Nataku's father so i dont really believe him... and seriously its a bad idea to talk and drink coke cause I almost choked XDD

I like this Sanzo said "Yeah right and I'm the tooth fair" and Goku, Hakkai and Gojyo Responding of "You are?" I couldn't stop laughing. Anyway thanks for sharing.

i loved it a lot

i loved it a lot

i loved it a lot

i loved it

What episode does Nataku save them from Homura? Did it actually happen?