I'M NOT CRYING, YOU'RE CRYING.

I think I'm beginning to understand where Kaitrith's coming from. She's really trying though, and I respect that.

I might have to put this story on hold soon, darn it all. Because I just realized that I'm not done with the game itself, and this might give me some spoilers.

Sigh.

Oh man, poor Inquisitor. She acted kind of childish here and I really enjoyed that - it makes her seem more human. And Josephine's the kind helper as always.

Had a laugh with this one. Nice job.

Nooooo Josieeee don't worryyyy.

Once more, I applaud your ability to keep the characters true to their personalities. I love Josephine's point of view of the Inquisitor - she's so nice. Cultural knowledge truly is world-opening.

Oh. I just realized why I like her so much.

Damn.

Anyways, I especially love how you portrayed our spymaster. Her friendship with Josephine is simply adorable. I feel it for her. Seeing as the Inquisitor is also an angry character here, maybe they'll bond a bit, as well?

On to the next one.

Your Inquisitor certainly is interesting. I suppose we can't start off with a perfect character; I was a bit worried here with her attitude towards Solas and...anything in general. Honestly, she seems a bit dangerous. I'm interested on how you'll handle her development. She's angry and seems to be impulsive, but the fact that another's kindness can reach her is noteworthy.

Liking it so far.

I'm enjoying this already. Varric was kept well in character, and Kaitrith seems to have a distinctive personality.

The fact that she's trying to court our Lady Ambassador makes it even better.

I'm scared of what her decisions will be when she gets to judge people lol

Ahh the perfect cuteness to make my day end on a happy note.

Amazing. No doubt.
Isnt b much ff about Josephine idk why, but this is the exception.
Please, give us more

fuuuuuu

Much better, thank you I was rather happy to see this included

woah big jump, I think we missed something here unless that scene was akin to cannon

Aw. I love this story! It's my second time reading it and it won't be my last. Please update!

This story is really well written! I look forward to reading more of your awesome work. Keep it up!

this is cute I'm surprised at the thought and detail you put in taking account of reports and rumor mills

Enjoyed this first chapter! Your introduction of the character and the way you ended it. "Could start by smiling." Loced that