Reviews for The Deadly Series - Book I - Deadly Lips
b.angaragerdene chapter 4 . 10/29/2018
And when would be the next chapter? I like this one so far. I usually ignore nonmagic fic. but it sounds really promising. Couldn't resist to point out, but the whole hogwarts express thing looks very similar to James Spooky's what we are fighting for. XD
Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2018
Dude why has this series stopped I already like the flammel experiments one and this one seems decent as well pls continue
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2018
Hermione is not a good girl. She's a bad girl a selfish conniving cheat.
Eyesoftime14 chapter 4 . 3/14/2017
fun read I hope that you add more chapters
Harley G. Potter chapter 4 . 12/25/2016
*laughs* Hermione digs muscles wow just wow Hermione
Plz make more plz. Also that means Harry can be harmful
Harley G. Potter chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
Still boring where is the good stuff where?
Harley G. Potter chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Boring I hope the next chapter is better
Guest chapter 4 . 12/22/2016
This is epic
Cecily Mitchell chapter 4 . 11/27/2016
Ah, that just means that she'll be underestimated once she finds her footing.
jaythekoala chapter 4 . 4/14/2016
I hope you return to this story soon! I have never read a story with this idea before, and you are using it really well.
pinks99 chapter 4 . 12/31/2015
I really enjoyed the chapter!
pinks99 chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Great start to your story! One small typo- you put "buy" when I think you meant "by."
V-rcingetorix chapter 2 . 11/9/2015
So ... they drug her parents because they can't be trusted. Then they give information to the parents kid, because the kid can be trusted.

The knack is in her blood apparently ... but neither of her parents can know? Honestly, I'd show McGonagall the door if she were so arrogant to my family. Who'd want that kind of training for their kids? Or inversely, how could I respect an authority that so clearly disrespects my own flesh and blood?

As a plot device though, it works. Don't worry about grammar and spelling; you're doing very well, better than a lot of native speakers I know.
Nicklley chapter 4 . 11/8/2015
I love it! And this Harry is fantastic!
I am anxious to see how is going to be his dynamic with Hermione...and the last sentence was the best... It's almost like: Sabe de nada inocente...hhhhh
Dr Stranger chapter 4 . 11/6/2015
Very intriguing story thus far; I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
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