Ugh! Yes please!

I have officially read every story you’ve posted on this site and now I’m sad because your Harry/Draco dynamic is so perfect, and now I have to go read someone else’s stupid writing.

Just wanted to say that Drary fics are creepy and unnatural and really OC.

Cada hiatoria tuya que terminó termina siendo mi favorita y con deseos de mas.

So let me just start off by saying that you are an utterly incredible story weaver. Your writing skills are at the very top of anything I've ever read, both fanfiction and professionally published, so I'm just unbelievably impressed by your writing. I have to admit I was very (very) surprised that I liked this story so much as I'm not a fan of slash fanfictions in general (like at all, for some reason all the ones I've ever read have been rather 'meh' and so grossly out of character that I just couldn't really enjoy reading them) and I'm also not a big smut reader. However, in my effort to improve my own 'scenes' that I'm trying to learn to write I've started reading more of that, and that's how I stumbled across this. And WOW and I glad I did! This story has definitely proved to be an exception to my dislike of slash fanfiction. The beginning action scene of Draco desperately running, following that utterly incredible one liner about Harry just HAVING to play the hero (but better phrased than that) was just an 'instant' draw in to the story. I have a LOT of trouble writing intro chapters, so when I stumble across one that has that great of an intro I kind of gape and go wow...expert level MASTER over here! So great job on that!

Now...for the emotion in the story. You did a great job of building up the tension, having them both stay somewhat in character (the only constructive feedback I have on this is that Draco is a little bit over the top in terms of submissiveness personality wise, but you somehow wove it so that it WORKED so amazing job on that) while still managing to change their personalities over the past decade in a believable way. I was honestly very, very impressed by that. I enjoyed the lead up (the stories about Hogwarts, the break up, etc.) and I really enjoyed the banter between Hermione and Draco throughout. The little 'moments' you created for them after they got together, with the eye contact, the faces lighting up, Draco always waiting for the other ball to drop, Harry getting so mad because he hadn't been 'clear enough,' and even just the whole twist with the 'nephew' (second cousin technically) being a wizard was just amazing! I really, really cannot express how much I enjoyed this story, despite it being something I really wouldn't ever seek out to read on my own normally. (I've read it twice in the past week and just gaped at how well written it is and how great the plot was both times.)

So that being said, thank you for writing this! It was truly a treat to find such a good, masterfully written fanfiction on here like this one. Your word use and vocabulary were also just unbelievably impressive. Great work!

Aww! I am so happy. I probably look creepy, grinning the way I am, but I can't stop. This was so perfect.

Ooo...I would love for there to be more of this. I'd love to read about Dominic's adventures at Hogwarts...and maybe about Harry and Dudley having some sort of adult relationship. Oh...and about Draco and Harry have some of their own (kidlets) too!

Nice story!

OMG this was fucking incredible

love it, but also would love more.

Really nice story.
I really love your stories.

Awesome.

I'm glad they finally came to their senses.

This is amazing

There are no words for how much I love this story. The only criticism is that it's kinda hard to follow the pov changes sometimes, but it was perfect otherwise. I love this. Thank you so much for writing this.

Liked it. Thank you.

When it comes to long one-shots, i tend to hesitate since it can get tiring staring at a screen for so long. and by tiring i mean it really hurts the eyes. But friends told me this story was worth the read and i completely agree. It was good. insanely good. You did a great job with the story