Sad day! It was actually good! My heart... It's broken ;-;

I'm not going to ask for more chapters, but I will say some encouraging words. You were getting better with each chapter, the more you write the more your able to bend the words to fit your story, I hope you don't completely give up on writing, at least keep something only you read, and know that whatever others say, you can create many pieces of art in the written if you practice and have a passion for it. But I also understand if it's not something you want to do, for if it isn't, don't drag down your life by the weight of following others wants. Instead fly. Fly like only you can and find your place in the expanding world.

It was getting to the really good part But I will keep on going on with it

This story is great, it only bothers me that the druid kids are always predicting the future and were immediately successful at complex spells.

Please update this fix soon! It's great

Really enjoying it hope you continue

Hey this was awesome i just hope you continue to update it :)

I like the story but feel that Amina is out of place, especially with the fact that you are saying she will be Merlin and Arthur's adopted daughter. I feel that she's a really random and unnecessary part of the plot.

excellent chapter update and i can not wait to read more soon please and thank you

Merlin would be a witch like Morgana, not a warlock.

My suggestion would be that Arthur slowly starts making ties to the druids and learns more about magic before going back to Camelot to confront his father. But please keep posting this story is really good.

maybe you could have them hid out with the druid where arthur learns the values of them and the ways in which magic can be used and practiced, then when uther returns to camelot, unsuccessful in finding merlin and amina to find arthur gone as well goes on like a rampage at all the staff and fires them all (not knowing who helped him) and the kingdom begins to fall without the support of the people. then camelot begins to get taken over by bandits (maybe the one who attacked Nila's camp) or morgana or something, when arthur, merlin and the druids hear about it the children, merlin and arthur go back to camelot to reclaim the throne and to find that in the taking over of the kingdom uther had died or vanished or something and then arthur takes the throne and marries merlin or something where magic reigns in camelot again, but supervised by merlin and the druids

Awe ! Rather and Merlin are so cute

It's great I love how you wrote it! I can't wait til the next chapter!

Hi! I love this story and I only hope you will continue to update it as I can't wit for when/if Arthur and Merlin get together! :) but no matter what you decide I will continue to read it as I think it's flipping fantastic! 3