Update please. A really good story. One of the best.

Hurry and make another already mate

Hurry up and make another one I can’t find another story like this one , and this one is probably my favorite so far

Pls make another couple chapters mate pls. Add in another character or something just hurry

Hurry up an make another chapter already mate

Heyy. Please please please update! I wanna knoe what happens ahead. Pretty please!

PLEASE! keep writing this story it is soooooooooo good and I love a lot and I hope you don't discontinue this story.

I LOVE parkour

some small and forgivable Grammer errors here and there throughout the first ten chapters, and some work is needed on storyboarding and lore building as well. oh and character development feels rushed and almost counter productive, but honestly this has been one of the most enjoyable chaos army fics I've ever read simply because you didn't just time skip 1000 years and Percy isn't holding a grudge like an angsty teenage girl.

Bri-lli-ant. Best story I've read in a while, please update soon so more people can read the great story that is the champion of Chaos.

Is this malexmale? I gotta kno before I read the rest of the story since it seems like it

Please Cintinue

Hey Shadow,
Loving the story so far! The only thing that kind of takes away from it was the sudden immortality. I think it would have been better if he proved himself first using his own skills then became immortal as the Champion, but its your story not mine. Other than that its great!
As for future chapters, I think it would be good if you reintroduced the others that were there in the beginning to show how they have come along.
See you soon,
Aesir

Very well written.
I like how it is progressing, not too slow and not too fast. Very enthralling. Keep up the fantastic writing.
Mhmm, not sure how to say but keep it in the army for the romantic partner, maybe a very high up general, who he eventually overpowers.

Please update