Reviews for As the City Breaths
Faisalliot chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
That was very interesting and I love the concept. This is very well written as well. Love it!
Lon chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
Excellent! Beautiful story.
Carottal chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
I don't get it.

I loved the idea of London coming to help most of all. Original, imaginative, poetic,... And your writing flowed nicely and made for a good read.

But I don't get why they seem not to question Sherlock's behaviour, but instead put all the blame on John. It may be because I missed some important point. I'm tired so I may have overlooked something in the fic, and I'm not very far in the serie (yeah, shame on me) so I may not have watched a crucial scene.

Maybe you could enlighten me on this.

Thank you for publishing this story. And really, apart from the blaming only John vibe (it's kind of an important point to the plot... but), I liked everything about your fic!
RayneLover101 chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
This is absolutely amazing! I initially wasn't sure about the whole city lives thing, but now that I've read the whole story, I love how you incorporated that into the story. It's absolutely amazing and I definitely give you kudos on a job well done on this story :3
librarywitch chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Oh wow, that was smoking awesome. I love it.