Hope to see more!

I like the writing, but there are a few issues:
1. Characterisations: Clary probably should have at least tried to kill Dorothea at least once now. Also, Dorothea (and co.) should be dead at Isabelle's hands. Perhaps the second can be explained away, but I'm not sure about the first; Clary isn't that placid and easily intimidated.

2. This is the major concern: the romanticising of sex slavery. I am willing to give you the benefit of the doubt, as we're only four chapters in, though. I do hope you're going to explore the true heights of the horror, despair and depravity that hide behind the pretty veneer Dorothea presents. I also hope that Jace will avoid anything sexual with Clary (considering that this situation would automatically make it sexual assault/rape, and that is more than a little beyond his characterisation).

Ordinarily I would try to leave a more balanced review, but this is such a serious topic and it needs to be handled right. I also would ask you to change the rating of this story to 'M', considering the nature of the themes involved.

Thank you, and I wish you the best for the next chapters.

Ohhhhhhh!loving it!i don't want clary to go back to her family, also could Sebastian appear in the bid?
Loving it!
Update soon
Anna xxx

Great chapter, only... is Jace actually gonna force himself on her? It doesn't seem like he knows/cares that they're forced to be a prostitute.

Hey so I'm dying to find out what happens next and I don't want to put any pressure on you or anything. But o god please don't take another year long break from this super cool story you are so freaking talented

interesting!

I'm guessing the buyer is Jace :) ! Update soon!

Omg it's great I love it pls updatde soon

Please update soon!

I know Clary's scared and all, so can you like have her talk to Isabelle and Isabelle suggest Jace to take her virginity, because he'll be gentle with her and that way she doesn't experience her first time as something she'll never want to remember, I know this story is on the basis of her going through that experience, but idk it just pains me to read when they do that to her in any story. This is just a suggestion and it's just so she knows what to expect and so it won't hyet her as much because there will obviously be men who will be harsh with her because they just want some booty, so with Jace taking her virginity it won't be so bad. I mean I know it will still be bad because she'll only be used for her body and she'll feel worthless, but yeah. You can also have Izzy suggest Jace and make him the highest bidder making Clary feel just a tiny bit better about losing her virginity, because once it's done once it's never the same. Do you get me? But yeah you could also just to talk ignore this review and do it your way.

One of the biggest fears a lot of girls have is for something like this to happen to them. The beginning is very scary, but this chapter took it to a whole new level. Sadly though, it's going to get a whole lot worse.

Please update soon.

Wow...just wow... This is amazing?,you have just left me speechless I have no words about how awesome this is gonna be.i love it keep it up
Update soon
AnnaXD xxx

Please updat! I've been waiting too long

Lol like this please update soon

Interesting start. Please continue.