I have enjoyed this very much. The plot is excellent, the characters are fantastic and I hope you are going to finish this.

Great story! I haven't been able to put it down since I found it. Would love to read more and see how it ends!

This is absolutely edgy, dark, despairing, gritty, and I am loving every second.

This. This is one of the best chapters of a fanfiction I have ever read. And I have never said quite that about a fanfic before. I don't know if it was your location set up (that second paragraph is by far one of the most succinct and vivid world-building scenes I have ever read), the richness of the fandom itself, your clean and simple wordsmithing or what, but I can feel liquid immersion running through my writer's veins and I am breathing this world and drinking the neon and the opulence and the bright shiny darkness and I am so ... so glad that words are my life and I get to revel in works like this. I know I am waxing oddly poetic, but it is my joy and my pleasure to thank you for this.

Oh man, please please please tell me you are still updating this story! I really want to see how it plays out! I think I have read all the rest of Swallow work, and all of Prelude's too, well that is done to date. I love the Heaven ward series; I wish there were more stories about EOS.

Love this one too!

great story Please keep it going

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Wow... XD I LOVE THIS! IT'S SO ADORABLY BROTHERLY! XD

I've just started reading this. I didn't know it would be this good. No offence but sometimes one is drawn to some fics and not others purely by title, summary and author name. I was silly to duck this one, and look forward to catching up with each chapter.

Great to see an update, have read this several times whilst waiting. Please continue, I really need to know what happens. I love your writing style.

I really enjoyed reading each and every chapter you have written so far. Please write more?

I'm so in love with your writing style, I've read this whole story like three times, I love it :)))

Hooley dooley, what a chapter. Loving the different facets you keep carving on these characters and the way you very cleverly pull a single subject thread through the whole chapter but still manage to surprise us at the end...even though you've been throwing bread crumbs at us throughout :)

I especially love the line '...all the good he could do with a vast agency and the world's best technology...' Now all we need is a net to catch us on this cliffhanger ending!

Oh wow what a brilliant chapter, Gordon will be Gordon no matter who he's pretending to be. Bravo to Red for playing a blinder, I certainly didn't guess and the last line marks the start of things to come.

Love it.

So I thought I had the aircon set too low, but nope, it was reading this chapter that gave me the chills...Kyrano continues to be such a wonderfully multifaceted and formidable character in your hands and The Hood...needless to say I'll be taking a shower after this chapter *shudder*.

It is however, encouraging that K Pop endures even in the 2060s...Wonderful chapter, thank you for sharing.