There are SO MANY POINTS in this story where I had to sit back and just go "wow".

So. Many.

Seriously, everything about this was amazing: the voices and characterization were spot on, descriptions and metaphors written in brilliant detail. I think it was somewhere where Rick was creating the Stan figure in the nightmare realm when I went "oh, this is fantastic writing, I can learn from this". And I DEFINITELY have.

I can't get over the metaphors. I can't. They're just SO well done. And the twins' (especially Ford's) inner monologue reflected them beautifully, you have such a great handle on their characters.

Intriguing. Enriching. Phenomenal. I'd favourite it right now if my little sibling didn't frequent my profile page. I enjoyed every bit of this and hope to see more from you in the future.

Benny The Crazed Cartoonist

Can I just say how fuckin incredible this is I love it so damn much, it's the best stanchez I've seen and the characters are in character 1000% fuckin amazing man.

What the hell is this shit I love it

Man I'm really enjoying this, you've got Rick's character down perfectly I'm just? Wow. This is great I'm really excited for more :D

Oh my God. They're going to kill each other. One on purpose and the other on accident. You really have a thing for two characters hating each other. I love it. You need to add both Stans at once though. There's a comic on tumblr where Rick comes to the mystery shack to pick up something and Stanley tackles his ass and keeps yelling child appropriate curses to drown out ricks cursing, while the twins and ford stand in the background. I can't help but see this as the prequel