Wow. I wasn't expecting things to unfold like that. What's going to happen with Ron I wonder.

Huh, I used Oliver Rivers in my story, and he's a Ravenclaw...

I liked how they got away from the spiders. More believable than what happened in the book. Lol

I wonder if Harry will vee skating the basilisk in this or if something different happens.

nice3 update, i'm with harry don't like the cover-up that was done, waiting for more

Just becoming? Very good, I'm looking forward to the next update

So what happened to Ron then ?

Good Chapter anyway & a great different take on the usual Chamber scene set up (which it damn boring after the fortieth or so time) .

Please let Slughorn do the right thing & turn Diary over to Dumbledore or destroy it himself . McGonagall & Flitwick both know , so if he has any wobbles , they'll steer him true . Hopefully anyway .

Update soon my friend - you bring entertainment & some light into these times of lockdown & boredom . Well done ! LK signing out .

One minor error. After both Harry and Elizabeth being hit with Crucio wouldn’t they be pretty much to exhausted to take the professors to the staircase. At the least McGonagall would send them to the Hospital Wing and not their common room. A minor discrepancy in a good pace chapter

Wonder what this new harry will make of slughorn and the preening ponce

Should be fun when hermione see the true lockhart

There's so much plagiarism here it's unbelievable. It's illegal to use JKR's words without her permission. You, personally, could get in legal trouble, plus you've put this site in jeopardy. JKR has already shut this site down once before for plagiarism. If you're going to use her words, you have to give her credit. Put an author's note at the beginning or the end. Or, bold her words and state the reason. But heaven's sake stop stealing from her.

Glad harry will have friends and family to help deal with his feelings after his confrontation.

Also glad snapes arrest was only delayed, not blocked

Interesting forrest detention.
And Elizabeth verbally laying into hagrid was novel

Guessing that either vader was intercepted, or more likely dumbles blocked snape being arrested

You've repeated the block of text regarding Adam Pickering 3x so far.

I like your version of the Battle of the CoS. A BAMF team of McGonagall, Flitwick and Slughorn? Beautiful and I think it's a first.

Nice holiday break

Interesting take on why the potters did not have the cloak when tommy came to visit

Interesting alternate 1st year halloween

Like the hew friends group. And the fact neville's wand issue was noticed by the staff, and resolved.