so this is freaking fantastic. so beautifully written, such an original concept executed so well. thank you.

Wow. That's the only thing I can say for this first chapter. (But of course I'll say more) :)

The entire chapter was wonderfully paced and beautifully written. Every sentence flowed and created a perfect picture of the action and everything that was happening. Not only that, but your depictions of the characters themselves was spot on. As I was reading the dialogue, it was like I was seeing the script for one of the episodes themselves. The scene you wrote in there for what happened when Barry was rescued was so realistic; it's exactly how the characters would have acted if they'd allowed us to see the scene continued inside the van.

I am so excited to read the rest of this story, especially if it's written like this one is. Awesome job!

This story was so intriguing! Well done, it was really captivating and really well written!

OMG this fanfic is soooo awesome! Like it had tension and a grdat story arc and the whole lile vibing of alternatives was so cool, and the characters so well captured. And there was also always somethi'g to make me smile in between. Just really great

Aaaaah, I still love this story so much. Must've read it at least three times now and it keeps being amazing. Just, it's so perfect. Amazing characterization, real cool writing with all the different time lines, the kidnapping trope which is just awesome just like break the cutie. Just so good.

This was amazing!

Dude this was the first story I've read in a long time that had me by the ropes till the very end. I took me two hours but your book was totally worth every second

thankyou so much for this wonderful story! loved it. do keep writing.

An absolutely fantastic finish to an amazing story! Can't wait to read more from you!

GOSH the alternate reality is heartbreaking D:

You leave me breathless... this is absolutely incredible. Incredible! I cannot wait for more!

This story is so entertaining and well-written! It's as if I'm watching an action movie my head. Well done! Can't wait for the next chapters!

Poor Barry! :( Great chapter!

this. is...AMAZING!

So good! Thanks for finding the time to write, I'm thoroughly enjoying this.