vampire...?i dislike that

nice story hope you continue it

Looking forward to the next chapter, I really hope it isnt a year away lol.

You know you are good at writing smut. Not every piece of smut you write is of super high quality but every piece you write is always of quality.

That said you are also just as good at writing stories. It's been a while for me since I've read the parts before this but its memorable. Your narrative flow is on point and your dialogue is always interesting. When you quite clearly try to make a plot with your smut its fun and interesting.

Reading more of this story is strangely nostalgic.

Got nothing really bad to say I guess.

Have a nice day D

Despite the fact that you made some of them into wallflowers, it was still a good scene. It got Vali's ideas and perspective across. I also appreciated the inclusion of Princess Shuri. Good choice there.

I love this chapter it leads up to so much and I think the dialogue is really good

This is the MCU, you'll always characters that end up not developed.

Thanks for the chapter, keep these updates going please

Nice chapter

I think you did a rather good job with the chapter, it wasn't exciting but then again, I didnt scroll down either to parts I would have possibly found interesting. Overall it was a new chapter on where things will go from this point forward. I am surprised however that the Time Stone wasn't mentioned to him by Boudicca at any point. Looking forward to the next chapter.

great chapter!

Nice to see a new chapter so soon. Also, definately interested in this new Civil war.

Is Vali going to absorb the Time stone?

Good chapter

What's even the point of this story if you're just gonna hamfisteddly wave some bullshit about "having to much fun" to gimp the mc and force an idiot ball into his hands? At this point I wish you'd never come back to the story instead of ruining it this way.