Beautiful and original, but I was distracted by the thought she should have been sustained as long as she was still his best friend even if he had fallen in love with her. I appreciate being emotionally moved, but the story needs to be logically consistent. Still, beautiful and original.
Thank you for sharing your creativity.

It is truly astonishing how much emotion you were able to pack into less than 1000 words. Your ability to pull in your reader in very little time is something I envy. please continue your good works.

Now...
I don't review often...
But I'd like to say, HOW DARE YOU! HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO ME! HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO MY CHILDREN!
If I weren't in a public place right now, I would be balling!

wonderful story, thanks for posting

Fuck... that hurts T_T

Beautiful!
/ You killed Hermione - You ... heartless! (

I say no more than my dog helps with the tears.

You state that magic is free, without rules, yet you put the restriction of a literal wish on it. And yet I have a sad smile on my face.

so sad but so well written

Amazing. I cannot say more. Deep. Overeaching. All-encompassing.

Woooow never expected this! Very unique. Wonderful and terrible indeed.

Short, very clever one shot!

beautiful.

This was rude. This was so rude. How could you rip my heart out with such a short one-shot? How could you? *goes to my corner to sob at how beautifully heart-rending this is*

This... Was incredibly gut-renching, is just... Woah...