Awesome work

I get why he may be angry by her lack of interest in the gym, but still dont see Ash in any position ti judge anyone, especially seeing he is a rookie that barely started and a ten year old brat who knows shit about the world and that the league allows it. But oh well, its the plot

Please please please update! This a great story and id love to read more of it if you still want to write it.

I love this! you literally made the pokemon world make sense in why they do everything, how ash is able to travel, everything

can't wait for more

Could we plz have an update or two on this story plz.

Many thanks
Zapdos articuno

As always this is just really interesting keep it up and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue

Update Soon please

"It seemed to be nothing that a long rest wouldn't have cured"

I believe this has a double negative that makes it incorrect to say in the context (the above is the equivalent of "It's something a long rest would cure". Considering she was worried about Ash's description, I think you meant the opposite.

Nice! Loved this

Another good chapter

That was a good read. Pikachu is surprisingly powerful.

This is pretty good, up there with traveller, challenger and a couple others. I'm not to chuffed with Pikachu as a starter but you've done it quite well.

This is great story, I hope you write more.

Will you be updating this story anytime soon?