Reviews for An Inconvenient Truth
femaleotaku001 chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
please update. I really love it
Fox in the Rough chapter 18 . 5/3/2018
Enjoyed the chapter! Can’t wait for more!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2017
SHIT BOI ED'S GOT IT GOIN ON
Jachien chapter 18 . 10/2/2017
Such clear and smooth writing. Great work!
Eli Clark chapter 9 . 10/2/2017
Maybe BLUE would be good though... anything but GREEN. Unless the GREEN was bright and like the color of Spring, that works. I wish I had golden eyes. I have to make due with blonde hair. Colored contacts... I didn't know they had those in Ed's timeline. Eh, whenever someone changes Ed's eye color, I always assume the worst instead of contacts. The worst being that they actually changed his/her eyes, which is an ultimate nightmare for me. Someone cutting Ed's hair short is also a nightmare for me.
Eli Clark chapter 8 . 10/2/2017
Wait, since when does Ed have GREEN eyes? Is everyone colorblind?! She has GOLDEN eyes! GOLDEN! How in the Hell is that even remotely close to GREEN?! From now on, whenever that word pops up as I read, I will immediately change it to GOLD in my mind, the color it SHOULD be, instead of the stupidity that is the color you chose to grace Ed with! Of all things... GREEN! Amber, I understand, molten gold, I understand, but GREEN?! You need your eyes checked.
Faery66 chapter 17 . 9/6/2017
Hope to read more soon.

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Jachien chapter 17 . 4/18/2017
Donovan is so creepy. good job!

i'm really enjoying reading this!
Jachien chapter 16 . 3/28/2017
well shit. mind controlled or not, Ed will never ever be able to live with this. and until alphonse showed up i was pretty sure she'd just end this whole thing by killing herself. she'd live for her brother though. then again, al would understand not wanting to live after this.
fhek.

this is excellent story telling and excellent writing. good job.
LeahRoth chapter 16 . 3/27/2017
Ok so... yes, I'm 100% hooked to this story. Hopefully this whole situation brings out a different side of Edaline, or maybe one that's been hidden beneath.
Hoping to see what happens.
tetraforce theory chapter 15 . 3/12/2017
so... brainwashing at some point in these 3 days?
LeahRoth chapter 15 . 3/3/2017
Once again: Loving the turn of events. Hope to see what happens very soon
LeahRoth chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
Hell... the suspence is killing me! really good! keep it up!
Willowstorm9 chapter 14 . 2/28/2017
What. I am so uptight with the suspense, you probably can see steam coming from my ears.

Gah. Cliff hangers! -dies-

(Brilliant chapter by the way)
tetraforce theory chapter 13 . 2/18/2017
Now I'm really excited for two of your stories, so far this one is my favorite.
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