Krystal has a closet full of Cosplay for her to try out on Fox.

Great Story dude. It felt well written, tasteful, warm, light hearted and compelling. it looked well written to me, and I didn't feel it was too Racy, But better safe than sorry. :D I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Dan F

WTF DID I JUST READ to be honest man that was pretty sexy i mean just picturing it made me drop my jaw to the ground (especially the lollipop part)

STAHP! STAAHHP! STAHP KILLING ME!

I'm starting to like these oneshots :)
I don't see anyone else writing these things, so it's good to see you guys doing it well. One immediate critique I have is that there's an error in the title. It should just be "Krystal Knows Best." No apostrophe needed.

That was sexy! Especially the part with the lollipop. I really enjoyed reading that, although I kind of agree with Haygood that I would have liked it to go a bit farther. At the same time, it may have been for the best to leave it where it ended. Most authors aren't subtle enough for my tastes when it comes to intimate scenes. Anyhow, I love the co-lab between the two of you, and I'm excited about there being an outlet for this kind of story.

So, since FF won't allow me to post video reactions, I'll just transcribe Haygood's reactions into text. Keep in mind it's like 1 AM while we're doing this, so he may be a little... I dunno, dramatic? I'm not sure. But anyway, as he reads it on his phone, I'll type out what he says. This should be fun.
(Disclaimer, this is just what he says as he goes along. Some instances will get a reference point)

- "Oh god, I don't think I'm ready for this."
As he went along, he kept smiling. Just a half smirk, goofy looking thing. I can't describe his smile accurately. It's stupid and he knows it.
- "Ten bucks says it's Krystal." Obviously he got to the part where the nurse said "the doctor will see you now"
- "Where's my ten bucks Scott?" Yep, he found it.
- "Heh... Cleavage..." *sigh*
- "Yeah... a "*checkup*". Like I'm falling for that"
- "And off goes the shirt."
- "The kiss to make it feel better mantra. Should've known."
- "She's getting dangerously close to downtown. Maybe this is why it's rated M."
- "Okay, Scott, write this down. My girlfriend did this to me once. She randomly pulled out a piece of candy from her bra, and when I asked her why she had candy there, she said it was where she held her goodies. I've never laughed harder in my life because I knew *exactly* what she was referencing." Lol I remember this story!
- "Only a matter of time before the pants came flying off."
- "Aww, the dream is over already? Shame..."
- "I was genuinely expecting sex." Of course you did.

Hahaha and now he's staring at his phone as if he was expecting more. I think you ended too soon for him guys. I think he wants more.

Anyway, for me, this was cute. I was expecting a little more... naughtiness towards the end there, but all in all this was fantastic. Few mistakes here and there, but who am I to complain? It's fluff. It doesn't pertain to normal laws of grammar. ;)

Can't wait to see more from you guys. One last thing from H, he says... er... *demands* that the next story involves a different type of passion if you catch the drift. I think you let him down on that aspect. Then again the last two or three scenes he's written for Veria have been... very... very... naughty... so it may just be his preference at this time.

Great work you two. Hopefully Haygood's reactions were what you were expecting? Cheers fellas!

-Sheppard & Haygood