How so many things could change with a gender switch. Though short, the fic is beautifully written. I appreciate your effort author!

Well THAT's certainly different. I'd say your Saaz have more sense than canon one. Not a lot more, but still. Let's see, where this goes...

Well that went down splendidly.

Unless you trying to emulate Slaine's sanity slippage, when we see the rare moments of clarity flashing through daze, the chapter feels rushed.

On the other hand, props for Kei, being steel nerved as she is, to notice the pulse. That's something right up her valey.

Keep up!

Where the hell Wolf came from?! I understand that beeing a male prince would probably beaten the snot out of Rayet Areash, surprise be damned. Or at least didn't gone down as easily as princess did. But how exactly Asseylum beeing male justifies Wolf's survivial?

This story feel like the condensed version of Aldnoah Zero with the gender flipped. I'm glad you did not have Slaine kill Kei.

Being Slaine is suffering.
Prince is pure, and a bit naive.
So far, so good.
Hoping to see your version of Inaho soon.