Reviews for Serpentine
EddBlackheart chapter 7 . 7/22
It really sucks that you seem to have disappeared. I loves all of your stories. Even the ones you deleted.
simsic chapter 7 . 7/5
i like this story ,its well written, very interesting, easy to read and understand.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/12/2019
Please continue this was so good.
PappyOldGuy chapter 7 . 11/4/2019
Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.
PappyOldGuy chapter 1 . 11/3/2019
Interesting start to what promises to be a good story. I have read quite a number of Harry Potter stories, including crossovers, and most have been good. It looks as if it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!
ashenerden chapter 1 . 10/14/2019
Seriously cringy stuff only fit to be read by edgy teenagers.
Jacob Phantom chapter 7 . 6/30/2019
Please update your story soon!
kirosyamcha chapter 3 . 6/14/2019
I checked your stories and I don’t see any other Harry Potter/Stargate stories
Uzushiogakure chapter 1 . 5/8/2019
Another one of these foolishness.
The Sound Shaman chapter 4 . 2/26/2019
Obviously a dragon or a fae. You were pretty clear about it.
dkentjensen chapter 7 . 10/5/2018
more plz
Daniel Huffman1 chapter 7 . 9/30/2018
Will the flood be involved with either the SGC or the wizard community. I am asking as allies or with they be like the wraith from Stargate Atlantis. You know there whole let me eat you and stuff.
Jim chapter 7 . 9/21/2018
Nice story and think its original. So saying that it is sad that you abandoned it.
Hmason chapter 2 . 9/3/2018
I KNEW IT!
Robert and 42 chapter 7 . 7/14/2018
no sg1?
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