| Reviews for Death Battle |
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UnofficialBlaine chapter 32 . 9/1 Love it, I've read a few of these and you are talented. Some ideas I've had were Cyborg (DC) vs Iron Man (Marvel), Monokuma (Danganronpa) vs Raichu (Pokemon) and Grovyle (Pokemon/Pokemon Mystery Dungeon) vs Robin Hood (Robin Hood) |
Unicorn 359 chapter 32 . 8/10 The nsxt battle is Red Hood vs Winter Soldier? |
SombraZorro70 chapter 32 . 8/10 Not surprised King Boo won. But the I'm more exciting for next Fight: Red Winter. |
Thunderbird chapter 31 . 8/3 Second time I've read this entire fic. I love it! Each battle is just as awesome, if not more than the actual death battles. I have a few suggestions for future battles that I hope you will consider. Thank you (Legendary): Godzill, Mothra, and Kong VS. The Megazord, Green dragonzord and White tigerzord The Knight(Hollow Knight) VS. Meta Knight Master Chief VS. The Predator the Xenomorph VS. Kravem the Hunter Sonny(Irobot) VS. The Terminator Sonic The Hedgehog VS. The Flash(Wally West) John Constantine VS. The Ghost Rider Ryu VS. Terry Bogard Sans(Undertale) Vs The Ghost Rider(Robbie Reyes) Jason Vorhees VS. Pyramid Head Lobo VS. Deadpool |
Unicorn 359 chapter 31 . 5/19 So next battle is King Boo vs Ganger, Neat. |
Shadow Joestar chapter 31 . 5/19 KO awesome chapter, guess Widowmaker has the true marksmanship of a sniper showing she is more than a woman in skintight as the Sniper find out the hard way how deadly her kisses are. |
Shadow Joestar chapter 30 . 3/23 KO awesome chapter, Vemon proves that even a blob ink monster is no match for the true black terror and I think I know who that first one is and I hope she wins! |
Unicorn 359 chapter 30 . 3/23 The next battle is Widowmaker from Overwatch vs The Sniper from Team Fortress 2 |
Guest chapter 29 . 1/30 Great story. Your attention to detail is superb! However sometimes I feel your characters need a little more development, maybe make the reader aware with motivates each character do be the character they are. Its your job as the writer to make it clear to the reader why they are the way they are and it's the writer who has to make it clear to the reader what are the motivations for each character. In your stories your characters just show up and the reader has no real idea why. Like what ever went down so that Sly and Joke ended up in a battle, that's what is not obvious when I read this. Other than that, I find it great and you are indeed a good writer. |
SombraZorro70 chapter 29 . 1/13 Bendy vs Venom. Huh, neat |
Shadow Joestar chapter 29 . 1/13 KO awesome chapter, I was not expecting Sly to Win against a Persona User like that but it was cool that he won and showed Ren who’s the real around here. |
DB-20 chapter 29 . 1/13 Venom vs. Bendy... HELL YEAH |
Guest chapter 16 . 11/3/2019 Alex Mercer vs Carnage and not the second game |
Guest chapter 28 . 7/11/2019 Great story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. I've been reading your work for some time and I think you need to come up with more original characters. Your grammar needs improvement and sometimes your writing mistakes take power away from your story. Sorry to be so direct, but I truly believe you have a great talent and if you improve on that, you can become an even better writer. |
DB-20 chapter 28 . 7/10/2019 So Joker (Persona) vs. Sly Cooper. Well this be interesting |