This is justin scott. Jerikas ex boyfriend that everyone hates and judged. Anyhow i jist wanted to say that the story is incredible and you both have done a wonderful job... i am so happy that you picked jerika to help because she is one of the best writers i have ever had the chance to know. Say hello for me and i am happy for her. Keep it up erica

Thought this was another Mary sue story. Boy in was sure wrong. Ducking funny this is. Particularly the last chapter. Not bad. :D

I'm probably a worse singer than she is.. XP This was a cute story!

I believe that my favorite part of the whole story was Legolas sitting on the couch eating peanut butter right out of the jar with his fingers! I may draw that... If I do, I'll send you a link! :D

My second favorite part was him being glad to leave the "metal box, for it frightened him greatly!" lol

great job!

this is by far one of the most...i guess interesting is the word...fan fics i have ever read. if you do decide to create a sequel, please feel free to let me know. the alternate world fan fics are always good but this one has to be the funniest and the best.

LOVED IT!

that was so cute! i love stories where legolas comes to our world and is all confused and stuff.i love the little song Elyssa sang in the

namarie

OMG! you had better write a sequel or i will hunt you down! hehe. not really, but please write one! this story was so sweet! adding to my favourites!

hm, actually, i think this story is pretty good, but way to short and fast. i think that it's slightly mary-sueish, -slightly-. prob'ly cuz of the way you made her sing and dance lessened the rest of the mary-sue came from her looks(which i have nothing against) and the way they clicked together so fast! it's just... so unreal! would also like to ask, doesn't Elyssa care about her parents at all? i mean, they raised her! and how could she just fall in love with someone in such a totally short time? it's just so unreasonalbe! sorry, i just like fics where things take time to work out, not where you meet someone and fall in love immediately!

oh my god. that was a REALLY good story. i think i'll add it to my favorites. i loved the part where she was sitting in the forest in middle earth singing about being raped. taht was classic. epic. you really should write a cookie to this or something. i mean it. it's really good, and there was an EIGHT YEAR span of time in which to fill, even if it is meaningless. i really want to read some more. seriously. i think this is one of the only mary sues i've ever read and liked.

and by the way, i posted my boromir fic, well, the first chapter of it, so go check it out. i wouldn't say no to you recommending it to all of your friends, LOL. anyway, KEEP WRITING.

Hi erika. Its me the evil ringwraith.I got your review and was glad to see that others thought my story funny too.I also got your story with it and read it.I loved it because somewhere deeep inside I have romanticism.I also think Orlando bloom is the sweetest piece of eye candy on this planet.(sigh) But to the point I think your writing would be a good story even if it were not based on LOTR. If you changed the names and didn't mention middle earth you could write your own romances.

Ooh! That was such a sweet story! :) Luved it!

I liked it. It was nicely written although a little short. About the garbage thing... how can garbage be extremely? Garbage is a noun, not a verb. Anyway, can't wait to read your sequel.

~Sara~

the end? so fast that was a good story, write some others like this im sure theyll be good!

Hey this story was great! I loved it. Most of the ones with the LOTR characters crossing over and whatnot I don't like. They're just lame. This one, though, ROCKED. Good job. It was sweet and I just loved it. Kudos to you!