Reviews for Untold Story: How You Made Us
wearedeadpool chapter 3 . 8/11
the Ozpin's pervert book part is just too funny, gets me every time.
FYN25 chapter 1 . 5/19
Wait... "Salju" is Indonesian for "Snow". Was that intentional?
NewOtaku chapter 1 . 12/20/2019
This became dark all too sudden. i suggest you take the darkness abit slower... make more tension but softer ones first.
avjuan37 chapter 5 . 11/21/2019
please make more chapters
avjuan37 chapter 5 . 9/25/2019
please make more chapters
Draco711 chapter 5 . 7/21/2019
Interesting. Waiting on the child of Nora to appear.
FYN25 chapter 1 . 7/13/2019
Wait, Salju means Snow in Indonesian, was that on purpose?!
wearedeadpool chapter 2 . 4/4/2019
please continue this story.
wearedeadpool chapter 5 . 1/9/2019
please continue the series.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/11/2018
dear writer please make more chapters
Alvelvnor chapter 2 . 8/27/2018
That OMAKE, Lol
Guest chapter 5 . 8/26/2018
dear writer please make more chapters
Alvelvnor chapter 2 . 8/25/2018
Aside from the spelling and grammar, the story itself is hilarious.
Rai chapter 2 . 8/14/2018
That was unexpected... But really good
Ghost2656 chapter 5 . 7/5/2018
WARNING THIS REVIEW MIGHT NOT BE WHAT YOU WANT SO, DON'T BITCH AND MOAN AND ACT LIKE A LITTLE PUSSY.

The story started off pretty good but you started to crap all over it when you tried to make it a dark/angsty fic. It became crap after that. I could see why you abandon it.
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