| Reviews for Ebony & Ivory |
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Axeremiria chapter 1 . 9/23 I’ve read this a few times CONGRATS ON THE FOURTH YEAR ANNIVERSARY OF THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY |
Guest chapter 11 . 9/6 BREAKEVEN?! I CAN NOT BELIEVE THISS AAAAAA |
sweetdemonenvy chapter 1 . 1/3/2019 I am re-reading this fic because the first time I read I totally fell in love with the whole concept and reading it again is just... beautiful beyond words. |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 20 . 3/30/2018 Very much happy reading this! Idk about my answers here... but I tried my best! Asnwers: 1. When Mika became really distant from Yuu, missing a whole week of classes. 2. How images comes to life while Mika is playing! 3. That Mika notes was going to change Yuu's life, drastically at that! And how Yuu entered Mika's life as a good change! 4. Asuramaru, he was so baffled and interesting to observe. 5. I guess the part where Yuu and Mika will facing head-on with the Shindos and Hiiragis. 6. Either Ferid or Mikaela's parents, Ferid who is a freakin creepy pedofile, Mika's parents for not even caring for their one son, and are just filthy adults that is mony and power craving ones. 7. How Mika used fake smiles to anyone he didn't trust, saying he's fine, but clearly not, and yearing for freedom. 8. Before Mika's escape from his mansion. 9. Ughh, I don't remember, I think it was Scented, an omegaverse fic, hm, the keeping of secrets, and the difference in ranks that separates them, and the 'reading so easily' like a single look in the face and know what their thinking. 10. I kept reading because on unraveling the secrets they both hold, Mika's piano playing which the effects of the images appearing and the ups and downs of it, and the teasing of Shinoa to Yuu, ahahaha! (Part was bc it was MikaYuu ehehe) Well, there you have it! I hope it was to your liking ahaha! The fic was oh so very interesting! Every description was well-written! Even if you didnt plan it out, the way the story was going, ups and downs, yearing me to read more further was wonderfully done! |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 19 . 3/30/2018 Yesssss! i felt like it was hard to write the part when Yuu and Mika arrived ahahah. I love this chapter! They're unseprable now! |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 15 . 3/29/2018 A cliffhanger that makes me crave for it more! I'm honestly missing Mika's piano eheheh |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 13 . 3/29/2018 I usually dont fangirl for my ships, but the development here MADE me! I give you my utmost praise for making me fangirl! ahahaha, soooo much fluff, which turned to suspicion to the others, Yuu's luck can be describe as good and bad ahaha |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 11 . 3/29/2018 Yes, it was more than okay! You say you're not good but the realization was perfect! And you wrote Yuu just as what he wold do ahaha. It wasn't OOOC i said it before, especially Mika, he would not want to cry, hmm well i guess to me, his shaking legs were a little OOC, just a little. And no, it was not too sudden, as you know Yuu would be there, bursting the door open and rushing in. And finally Yuu ADMITTED IT! |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 9 . 3/29/2018 The... Umm cuddling was the best ahaha, tho one of the signs that a big storm will come... Btw, im literally reading this on one day, and sooooo worth it! |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 8 . 3/29/2018 Sleepover! Btw youre not moving the story fast, just the right speed in my opinion! And, i can agree about writing Mika, the change in him was a little big, but this was right! (I think) You did Mika has like a patern, there was his timid side for Yuu and the reserved and cold side at home, of course he wrmed up in Yuu whixh made him (i guess) timid, and I LIKE IT ahaha |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 5 . 3/28/2018 Ok, it seems that you really are anxious about 'Yuu developing feelings' its working out just fine! Like any other developing, first step - denial. You did a great job at that, pretty funny too |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 3 . 3/28/2018 Yess theres more fluff here yaayy |
CuriousBlackCat10 chapter 2 . 3/28/2018 Clingly ahaha! Again, this was very pleasant! This makes want to dive in more into music and maybe even secrets ahaha! I love this soo much already! The way you added the music, descriptions (maybe even MikaYuu) its so descriptive adding the music is a big bonus (me a music lover ehehe) |
geaiuhevupb chapter 20 . 2/17/2018 This...it reminded me so much of the anime Your Lie in April. The feeling I get when I master a song on piano or violin and all those emotions of making other people happy when they hear it...it was beautifully described in this brilliant story. Don't stop writing. You have such a wonderful talent that needs to be shared with this cruel world. Your writing makes the life sweeter to those who read it. Thank you for it. |
Qwerky chapter 10 . 11/21/2017 Don't get me wrong,this is a great story but it's really sad. |