Like it, however it wouldn't be $10, if you meant 10 you use the yen symbol.

Liked this chapter, better than the first one, I think the dialogue is very fluid between Maou and Emi, I would say that would be the highlight of this story. I'm interested to see where this is going, keep up the good work.

Nice, the dialogue back and forth of Maou and Emi really stands out. It is really fluid and it seems natural, you did an impressive job there. Let's see where this is going.

Awesome!

The first chapter is interesting, i'm waiting for the next one ;)

Hahaha more pleease~

First I'll say welcome to the fandom. I also,pet though this was one of those rare one-shots inspired by the novels, because the tittle said co-workers enemies. But guessing from the authors note, you've only seen the anime. It's kinda a waste because the novel is such a nice read and a real recommendation for those who read the manga and watched the anime.

Alright now on to the review. As I said I almost thought it was based of the novel since Emi becomes a member of the crew in volume 11. anyway a few things you need to correct. Hatamaou takes place in Japan so their currency is yen not dollars and 10 yes is less than a cent so it's pretty much an insult. Next time Emi's wallet is from rilakuma (relaxbear) so it has an image of a bear not a cat. Maou teased her occasionally because she likes rilakuma. Since when does Emi practice pickpoking as the hero of Ente Isla it's something very unlikely to do. Since it goes against her beliefs.

Anyway the idea well it's a bit like the future development of the novel, cept for the development they went through and the absence of some characters. I'll stick around to see where this is going.

Btw please don't be offended by this review, since feedback is very important and there's always room for improvement.