Quotes within quotes (or dialogue) should be between apostrophes not quotation marks. "Blah blah blah 'bleh bleh' blah blah blah." It's a good story, very hot,but you do have a few minor errors like forgetting to capatilize the beginning of sentences or names.

Yep you ruined pie for me too!

I'm gonna request a sequel pretty pretty please. I really liked this and would love to see more, but maybe with the boys getting into a true relationship with each other besides just the D/S aspect. I love the D/S bit but with the way you've written it I don't think the boys would be to overly keen to be with someone else even when they aren't playing.

Yum ... Kinda want to see more blindfolded dean, but the ear plugs are a little much ... That might just be me, though, I don't like total sensory deprivation ...
Which somehow leads to the two having sex in a pool or hot tub in my mind ...

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Kind of wonder how the party is going to go ... Can't imagine Sam sharing dean just yet (too new, and Sam strikes me as the jealous type) but maybe observing another couple ...
Also want to see a variety- het and gay couples, female and smaller male doms over larger partners ... Etc.

Why aren't more people reading this story ? I literally blush and break out in a sweat !
Your descriptions are sooooooo naughty ! * evil laughs * Cannot wait until your next chapter, so if you'll excuse me I need to take a cold shower !

Wow, um, I FREAKING LOVE THIS! I always fantasized Dean as a bottom but none of my friends could see that. So thank you thank you thank you. My boyfriend and I were reading this together and now he has a raging boner. HA! I'm the dominate and now he's pissed at me but, this story is gorgeous in its own twisted and kinky way. You aren't getting the attention you deserve. I am your biggest fanfiction fan now. YAY! DONT STOP WRITING IT PLEASE. I'd love to comment more on this but the boyfriend I mentioned earlier is also tied to our bed with a ball gag and I don't like punishment when he's top. Hot wax and mechanical dildos. *hint, hint* ok thank you for writing this and I'll see you next chapter!