Reviews for Heretic
scars from the sun chapter 1 . 5/22
Third time reading it. This is a masterpiece.
GaylyTheyRing chapter 1 . 4/11
Holy shit. I had actual shivers by the end of this. I absolutely love the repetition of her birth, showing just how wild she is. I don't know if you meant she was a breach birth or if it was just a metaphor, but either way I Am Here For It. It's almost like a character study, and I just love this to bits. You, if you ever want to publish anything, are sure to go places.
Elentiya21 chapter 1 . 6/18/2019
This was freaking awesome. I love the way you can breath so much life and feeling into ALL your characters, the majority of which, in canon, while important, are more background.
problematic spiral chapter 1 . 12/8/2018
This is really beautiful. I really love how you potray Kushina here than what canon did to her, she's more bamf material here, and Kurama as a partner, a familiar is awesome, I really liked their bonding moments, and the depth you added to those two, which something is most lacking in fanfiction. So like I said before, this is beautifully written.
Sands Buisle chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Its nice to find a story about Kurama as a familiar.
House of falling cards chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
This is fav.
Amequa chapter 1 . 6/17/2018
Yassss queen Kushina! This is the Kushina I wish I could have seen more of in canon. She was done dirty by Kishi. I remember in one of the Naruto video games, her finishing move was smashing someone with a frying pan (like wtf).

This was so well written and I really admire you as a writer! Thank you for writing this and if you ever want to rant about sexism in Naruto, or plot holes, feel free to hmu!
Maya Chain 23 chapter 1 . 12/19/2017
This is a great concept and I absolutely love their partnership and Kushina becoming the yondaime! 8D
Raraiki chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
Oh my god this fanfic is beautiful
Chaos537 chapter 1 . 11/14/2017
Wow have to say wasn't expecting this. It was really unique. Never seen a story where Kurama is raised with love instead of hate. Really enjoyed this story.
CherepMikhailov chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
i love Kristina
Thanks for this touching story
itsmycupoftea chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
I love this story so much! I love how Kushina becomes much more than what she's been described as in canon and that she achieved her dream in becoming Hokage. I loved the idea of Kurama and Kushina becoming friends and building such a strong bond and them doing everything together
Marching Madly Onward chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
There's a lot to like here. Kushina gets to be more than "Naruto's mom/Minato's wife," and it explores the idea of befriending Kurama instead of sealing him away like a prisoner in a way that isn't as sudden and jarring as it was in canon.

The refrain of Kushina having been born feet first and how that foreshadows her forceful, always-forward, never-backward mentality was great.

In fact, the only thing I can say against this story is that it's a one off. I would have really liked to see this story played out over the years. I imagine Tobi's attack wouldn't have been nearly as successful.

But I would say you've done a damn fine job if you've left your audience wanting more. Well done.
Ka-tay's mind chapter 1 . 5/19/2017
I can't believe I'm only discovering this now but holy crap it's written beautifully.
fernandfeather chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
I think this is my favorite fic of all the one's you've written.
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