| Reviews for Heretic |
|---|
scars from the sun chapter 1 . 5/22 Third time reading it. This is a masterpiece. |
GaylyTheyRing chapter 1 . 4/11 Holy shit. I had actual shivers by the end of this. I absolutely love the repetition of her birth, showing just how wild she is. I don't know if you meant she was a breach birth or if it was just a metaphor, but either way I Am Here For It. It's almost like a character study, and I just love this to bits. You, if you ever want to publish anything, are sure to go places. |
Elentiya21 chapter 1 . 6/18/2019 This was freaking awesome. I love the way you can breath so much life and feeling into ALL your characters, the majority of which, in canon, while important, are more background. |
problematic spiral chapter 1 . 12/8/2018 This is really beautiful. I really love how you potray Kushina here than what canon did to her, she's more bamf material here, and Kurama as a partner, a familiar is awesome, I really liked their bonding moments, and the depth you added to those two, which something is most lacking in fanfiction. So like I said before, this is beautifully written. |
Sands Buisle chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 Its nice to find a story about Kurama as a familiar. |
House of falling cards chapter 1 . 8/3/2018 This is fav. |
Amequa chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 Yassss queen Kushina! This is the Kushina I wish I could have seen more of in canon. She was done dirty by Kishi. I remember in one of the Naruto video games, her finishing move was smashing someone with a frying pan (like wtf). This was so well written and I really admire you as a writer! Thank you for writing this and if you ever want to rant about sexism in Naruto, or plot holes, feel free to hmu! |
Maya Chain 23 chapter 1 . 12/19/2017 This is a great concept and I absolutely love their partnership and Kushina becoming the yondaime! 8D |
Raraiki chapter 1 . 12/3/2017 Oh my god this fanfic is beautiful |
Chaos537 chapter 1 . 11/14/2017 Wow have to say wasn't expecting this. It was really unique. Never seen a story where Kurama is raised with love instead of hate. Really enjoyed this story. |
CherepMikhailov chapter 1 . 7/4/2017 i love Kristina Thanks for this touching story |
itsmycupoftea chapter 1 . 6/5/2017 I love this story so much! I love how Kushina becomes much more than what she's been described as in canon and that she achieved her dream in becoming Hokage. I loved the idea of Kurama and Kushina becoming friends and building such a strong bond and them doing everything together |
Marching Madly Onward chapter 1 . 5/24/2017 There's a lot to like here. Kushina gets to be more than "Naruto's mom/Minato's wife," and it explores the idea of befriending Kurama instead of sealing him away like a prisoner in a way that isn't as sudden and jarring as it was in canon. The refrain of Kushina having been born feet first and how that foreshadows her forceful, always-forward, never-backward mentality was great. In fact, the only thing I can say against this story is that it's a one off. I would have really liked to see this story played out over the years. I imagine Tobi's attack wouldn't have been nearly as successful. But I would say you've done a damn fine job if you've left your audience wanting more. Well done. |
Ka-tay's mind chapter 1 . 5/19/2017 I can't believe I'm only discovering this now but holy crap it's written beautifully. |
fernandfeather chapter 1 . 5/14/2017 I think this is my favorite fic of all the one's you've written. |